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~~~ You're The One ~~~

Updated on May 13, 2013

* Rock Ballad *

~ You're The One ~


V1/ Your conscience cried,inside my head,

That woke me,as I lay in bed;

I reached across,but you weren't there,

'Twas then,I knew,I really cared.



V2/ I gave myself a mental boot,

Jumped outta bed,put on my suit,

Burned up my car,to be right where you are;

Now holding hands,it's a quarter-past-two,

Should always be just me and you,

Without you boo,I wouldn't know what to do.



CHORUS/

Illuminates,these autumn days,

Your face,which pierced this wintry haze;

Kissing,laughing,drinking cokes;

Trying to sing,whilst telling jokes.

My love,my world,my only girl,

The pearl,that makes my senses swirl.



V3/ Geronimo!Splat!,on to your bed,

Swaying chandeliers,when we are wed.

There is,has been,and never could be,

A woman more perfect,stay with me.

We feel the same,share similar dreams,

And babe,d'ya know just what this means?


REPEAT CHORUS


V4/ The reach for you,exceeds my grasp,

Come closer,let our fingers clasp.

I long to hold you, in these arms,

To keep my lady,safe from harm.


REPEAT CHORUS TO FADE ......

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      Joanne M Olivieri 4 years ago

      This is just extraordinary and so well versed. Voted Up and shared.

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      Romeos Quill 4 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Joanne M Olivieri

      Your writings are always beautifully illustrated,and I liked the 'Ethereal Beachcomber' poem you wrote.

      Many thanks for your notable comment,and sharing,and I look forward to soaking up more of your lovely penmanship.

      Yours Sincerely,

      Romeo's Quill

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      Oh Romeo, Romeo, Romeo! Oh my goodness gracious me oh my, now I must dry my eye! This is so beautifully awesome!!! I'm in love... with this ballad! I'd love to hear you sing it! :-) It's adorable, it's dreamy, it's sweet and steamy! Romeo, to the sky with this one... to the sky! I love it, love it, love it! Did I mention, I love it?

      Yours Truly,

      Cat

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      Romeos Quill 4 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Cat

      I tawt i taw a puddy cat!I did,I did saw a puddy cat :) I love your little rhyme-that was brilliant.I'm still not sure,though....did you say you loved it? lol!Thanks doll face for your lovely comment;you float my boat.

      Yours Truly,

      R.Q.

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      R.Q.

      Oh you have me cracking up! That's got to be, by far the funniest... but that is about the third "American" television bit you've referenced... of course, I really don't know what you have over there, but was astonished to find no "Mister Rogers".

      Yes, yes, I said loved it! Boats can float from England to America right? :-)

      Did my message come through? I sent an experimental one.

      At any rate, I have new chapters to read... Yipeee!

      Yours Truly,

      Cat

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      Romeos Quill 4 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Cat

      Yes,indeed;it came through.I returned.Are you receiving mine?

      Sincerely,

      R.Q.

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      R.Q.

      Well look at that... it's a miracle... much like you (there's that cheese again)

      Yours Truly,

      Cat

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Beautiful work! I can just hear the beat..... Tap my feet, and snap my fingers, LOL. Nicely done, Romeo..... Waiting for the next one :)

      Take care, Buddy!

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      lovedoctor926 4 years ago

      This was awesome! nicely done. voted up++

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      Romeos Quill 4 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Cat

      Thank you.

      Sincerely,

      R.Q.

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      Romeos Quill 4 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      LaThing

      Hey! Thanks for the positive comment.I only do the occasional song,but I'm glad you liked it.

      Yours Sincerely,

      Romeo's Quill

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      Romeos Quill 4 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      lovedoctor926

      Thanks a bunch!Enjoy the rest of your evening.

      Yours Sincerely,

      Romeo's Quill

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      Jose Velasquez 4 years ago from Lodi, New Jersey

      Have you recorded this? It would be nice to listen to it.

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      Romeos Quill 4 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Hey;PHILLYDREAMER!

      No;I haven't recorded this one yet.I wrote it for a female singer friend of mine,but I had written a few more songs recently,and this one ended up on the back-burner;one of which I recorded to the accompaniment of me playing acoustic guitar,which I'll try and get published as soon as I can this week,hopefully.

      Yours Sincerely,

      R.Q.

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      Rosemary Amrhein 3 years ago from Boston, MA

      Beautiful work Romeo, and that name suits you well!

      Any girl would be - well I am floored by this romantic squeakyclean awesome poem and with due respect I love it!

      Thanks for this Awesome, Useful, and BEAUTIFUL poem

      A Rose For You!

      Sincerely,

      Blondey

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Hi Blondey!

      I missed seeing you around here - there are only a few special people that prevent HP from turning into a cemetery, and you sure are one of them, and it's so good to 'see' you, that you've moved me to offer this:-

      Atmospheric

      Revelation

      Of

      Simple

      Elegance

      Fragrantly

      Opalesces,

      Rewarding

      Your

      Overwhelming

      Uniqueness.

      Thank you, dear Rose....you've made my day.

      R.Q.

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