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An Epic Woman

Updated on January 10, 2012

A Chance Encounter

I Read a line in the epic, "The Aeneid" by the poet Virgil that reminded me of a beautiful woman that I encountered but was afraid to approach, because of her stunning beauty.

'What age so happy brought you to birth ?

How splendid were your parents

In having concieved a being like you."

Here is my poem to her:

She wore her hair up

a lady with a crown

I wish I was with you

when it all comes down

To look at her

that pretty face

Her eyes shine brighter

than the stars in space

Fine, Sweet, and Tender

Who wouldn't love this lass

She is a woman

nothing but class


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      cr00059n 5 years ago

      Woman are well admired in famous poems alike. It just shows that there is so much humanity in the world. Thanks for sharing.

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      epigramman 5 years ago

      ...well you are an epic woman yourself for writing like this ....and so very nice to meet you my friend - love your enthusiasm and your passion and your wonderful attitude - and as I always say - if you write from the heart then the mind will always follow .....lake erie time ontario canada 8:54pm and happy new year with warm wishes for your continued health and happiness and prosperity too - good luck with your studies and please let us see more of your awesome writing talent.

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      Caroline Marie 5 years ago from Close to Heaven

      Love this! Gorgeous poem. Voted up.

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      poetvix 5 years ago from Gone from Texas but still in the south. Surrounded by God's country.

      Short but sweet! Love it, thank you for sharing.

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      Jen Christopherson 5 years ago from Oklahoma, USA

      I love this poem! You seem to just have poetry pouring out of you! That is fantastic!

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you for the encouragement,Dreamer and Vix

      My fan base is rising, what can I say

      Hope that you read more of my poetry

      and with the words that I play.

      Women are my inspiration

      so much inner beauty to see

      All the women poets on hubpages

      just fill me with such glee

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      LChristiane 5 years ago from Florida

      I LOVE IT. You painted a perfect picture of this woman, she became real to me.

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Thank you. Christiane.

      Your poetry is great also.

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