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A Boo Hoo Day

Updated on March 3, 2011
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the clouds are just a cryin'...
in a pitiful boo hoo...
enough to keep me sighin'
and make me feel right blue...

everything is soggy...
weepy puddles all about...
the ground is soft and boggy
the day is in a pout!

snow is just a meltin'...
and turning into slush.
as cold rain drops are peltin'
its not a day to rush!

so while these clouds are cryin'...
sobbin' their boo hoo...
I'll be here denyin'...
that I'm a weepin' too!

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      Annette Donaldson 6 years ago from Northern Ireland

      lovely. A few simple words but really nice sentiments.

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      No_Clue 6 years ago

      thanks thebluestar...was kind of a fun piece about a rainy blue day.

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      Xavier Nathan 6 years ago from Isle of Man

      Brilliant. The picture also enhances the very expertly described moo-d

      Thank you.

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      No_Clue 6 years ago

      Spirit Whisperer! A delightful, moo-d altering comment! No Boo Hoo-ing here! Thanks!

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      hipcio 6 years ago from Poland

      Yes, Spirt - Brilliant is a good word.

      Thank You No_Clue!

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      Gustave Kilthau 6 years ago from USA

      No_Clue - Did you wake up today and find you had donned your "blue genes?" :)

      Gus :-)))

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      No_Clue 6 years ago

      hipcio, thank you! I am happy you stopped by!

      Gus...how did you know??? lololol! sniff sniff!

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      dianeaugust 6 years ago from Tennessee

      Such a nice way to put all the boo hoos that come up for us. Lovely language. Lovely words! da

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      No_Clue 6 years ago

      thank you, da! clouds quit cryin today! wooo Hooo! Thanks for the read and lovely compliment!

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      Gizmo Prodigy Publishing 6 years ago from Shreveport, LA

      I love this so much emotion and consistency

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      No_Clue 6 years ago

      thanks Lawrencebeach! I so appreciate the read and comment!

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      Doug Turner Jr. 6 years ago

      Yeah, this winter has nearly brought me to tears as well. They just never seem to end.

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      No_Clue 6 years ago

      Doug, Take heart! Spring is near! Good things come to he who waits...and God knows...we's awaiting! Thanks for the read and comment!

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      vietnamvet68 6 years ago from New York State

      must be the winter blues, sometimes we just want to weep with nothing to do but stare out the window in wish that spring will soon be here.

      God Bless

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      No_Clue 6 years ago

      vet, winter holds its own beauty but enough is enough, already! lol...thanks for the read and your comment!

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      attemptedhumour 6 years ago from Australia

      A lovely, if somewhat sombre, rhyme. Well done.

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      Pamela Lipscomb 6 years ago from Charlotte, North Carolina

      I have had many boo hoo days and always appreciate the sunshine! Beautifully done.

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      No_Clue 6 years ago

      2besure, I do too! Thanks for the read and comment!

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      erthfrend 6 years ago from Florida

      Aww, I really like this, I loved the style and the imagery..and the picture went perfectly with it..Great job!!

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      No_Clue 6 years ago

      thanks, erthfrend! I so appreciate your read and comment!

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      Kathi 6 years ago from Saugatuck Michigan

      Enjoyed this boo hoo from you hoo!

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      No_Clue 6 years ago

      Fossillady, your comment made me smile! wooo hooo!

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      lilbittykitty90 6 years ago from Here

      We all have days like this. Beautiful.

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      No_Clue 6 years ago

      lilbittykitty, it is so true! Thanks for stopping by!

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      Mike Light 6 years ago

      That sounds like a dark day, you convey the emotion perfectly through this simplisticity and beauty.

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      No_Clue 6 years ago

      Mike, it was a dreary day, but...it passed...and then it snowed!!! lol...thank you so much for your read and lovely comment. I am in a silly sort of place at the moment...so forgive, please...this too shall pass! Blessings upon you!

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      ClaraN9 6 years ago from United Kingdom

      Very nice poem!! I really enjoyed it! I love rainy days though, because I can stay in and be lazy.

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      No_Clue 6 years ago

      Thank you, ClaraN! I like rainy days too!

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      BeyondMax 4 years ago from Sydney, Australia

      Amazing blues! This is just so beautiful while being tad bit sad. I love it, it sounds strange, but I say that I feel like it is sort of sounds soothing to me.

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      No_Clue 4 years ago

      Max, I remember the day I wrote this, and the writing soothed me a bit! Thank you, again, and hugs!

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