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A Brotherly Advice to Hubbers

Updated on November 25, 2012

To lash out

against injustice

Or forever

Bottle up my emotions?

If this is a new land

We pride ourselves to be in,

digging heels,

building skyscrapers on,

We should stop hitting the ceilings


Or stomping the yards,


When somebody begs to differ

or somebody goes hog wild looking for a solace

This is a new age

A new planet

built by moans,whispers

and euphoric shrieks.

We should hold on together

when a plight befalls

and a road becomes blurry

or cul-de-sack

We are humans

We live and thrive in a large pack

different colours

different races

To Adam we belong

To God's sight equals.

No need to squeeze through the keyholes

or hurl a smile from a mask.



we're ever meant to be.

The less traveled

sometimes is

the straight shortened path to the truth.




are all what we ever have to do.

We shouldn't rush or judge

If it is running on the empty.

We should slow it down

to the level:

one step at a time,

for there’s no rush

or dash of sin

to get to the peak.

Live and love

God will make us

grow and thrive

as peaceful community

Under His wings.


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      Tijani Achamlal 5 years ago from Morocco

      So am I.I dont understand why we fight with each others.What for?money?power?..that s all old vanity.Thanks for stopping by and commented.

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 5 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      Dear James.. if we could all just live together.. be happy why do we have to fight? never have figured this out.. mmmmm... just wondering and pondering and loving your poem


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      Tijani Achamlal 5 years ago from Morocco

      Epigramman. Yes,we are :). I am glad you like it.Thanks for the visit.

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      Tijani Achamlal 5 years ago from Morocco

      Lady E,Thanks so much for stopping by here also to comment.I really appreciate your daily visits :)that s a honor :)peace is amazing,I don t know why diversity leads wars.We human are herd of lunatics:)

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      epigramman 5 years ago

      Profound and inspiring - it is like something I would write - lol lol - maybe that's why I loved it - lol lol - so you know what that means - we are twins and great minds think alike - and it takes one to know one - sending you warm wishes from lake erie time 6:54pm

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      Elena 5 years ago from London, UK

      Very beautiful and thought provoking poem.

      Full of words of wisdom. I also believe that it is possible to live in Peace.

      Lovely prayer at the end. Thanks.