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A Chinese Whisper – The poem

Updated on November 21, 2012
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Withdrawing in a mere choice

Subtle hint to metaphor some abandoned cry

A curve in your lips

To hide the faraway emotion

Why the mask of latent truth is so rude?

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Every other day a new juxtapose

Tour to the unknown chemistry of split dry

But a bohemian elegy

Then some whirlpool of unspoken words

Why the rust of potent root is so crude?

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Reality is a makeshift departure lounge

Then some smile factor is spread to hide the crease

Good bye to new moon

There is little ethereal essence to fulfil

Why the husk of resent growth is so loud?

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Will you be able to satisfy the urge?

To be the culprit of denial and funeral of breeze

A few ruthless jargons

Then a free Chinese whisper to catalyse

Why the crust of present tassel is so brutal?

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A choice to have a sedative to celebrate

Sleep is a hypnotic child of disharmonic freeze

Chaotic is the soothing comfort

The frozen zone of hitherto of rhyme

Why the crux of fossil time is so fragile?

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A suicide of untold fortress of melancholy

But even a lie to the end of eternity yet so lucid

Blur was the portrait so perfect

But a cascade of split second passion

Why we tumble after the illusion called life?

You and me….

Grown on a Chinese whisper

Yet we have a root so far….

Then an orbit to go by…

An illusion to die for…

As the metaphor called destination is nonentity…

And the Chinese whisper is growing tall.

Let all your emotion to water the whisper….

The echo is crisp yet so passionate...

And we are still living the whisper so illusive !!!!!!

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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      Stunning and beautiful poetry here. Your sheer gift of writing just blows me away. You are awesome. The images are out of this world and perfect with this amazing write.

      Voted Way Up and sharing

      Happy Thanksgiving. In His Love, Faith Reaper

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      Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

      wow this was amazing.. im still reading your poem in my head even while im commenting...:) I know how is that possible? right?

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      Cynthia B Turner 4 years ago from Georgia

      Very ethereal and beautiful. Your choice of visuals reenforced the mood of the poem. "Reality is a makeshift departure lounge..." great verse.

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      You use words and metaphors so wonderfully, the poem is sublime. When we can reach out and touch someone with only a few words, We know why the illusion of life is so worth the tumble. Beautiful work.

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      thadus 4 years ago

      Wow I loved it, very beautiful and with great verse.

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      flashmakeit 4 years ago from usa

      I had to rate this poem as awesome for the intense thoughts you have written in a Chinese whisper.

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Dear Faith,

      Many thanks for your kind visit, view, votes and shares. I just try to express my feelings of the moment and its such pleasure to know that you have liked my poem.

      God bless you dear and happy thanks giving to you also

      Deergha

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      Dear Frank,

      Its a delight to know that my poem has the strength to make a mark in your mind for a while. You are very kind and I do appreciate your visit and comment here always.

      God bless you

      deergha

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      Many thanks @Cyndi10

      for you stopped by here and took time off to comment. Its much pleasure to have your visit.

      God bless you

      deergha

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      Dear tobusiness......Its a pleasure to feel that my words could touch your feelings. Your appreciation of my work is valuable for me always.

      God bless you

      deergha

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      Thank you @thadus.....you are always welcome and your view here is much appreciated.

      god bless you

      deerghs

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      Dear flashmakeit.......many thanks for your view here. I do appreciate that you took your time off to visit my work.

      God bless you

      deergha

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      Martin Kloess 4 years ago from San Francisco

      Thank you for this beautiful flight, A very real play on one's feelings.

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Dear Mhatter,

      many thanks for your view here. Its precious always for me.

      God bless you

      deergha

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      Shining Irish Eyes 4 years ago from Upstate, New York

      Stunning and thought provoking read and I will continue to mull it over throughout the day as well.

      Great job.

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Dear shiningirisheyes......many thanks y you had expressed your appreciation about my work. I am really much touched.

      Gos bless you

      deergha

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Wonderful poetry. Much enjoyed.

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thanks for your kind visit here @Gypsy, Its always much appreciated.

      God bless you

      deergha

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      Audrey Howitt 4 years ago from California

      This does have such an ethereal quality to it!!! Lovely!

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Your view is always much appreciated here @ AudreyHowitt. Many thanks that you liked my work.

      God bless you

      deergha

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      Christy Birmingham 4 years ago from British Columbia, Canada

      What a creative poem, well done!

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Many thanks dear Christy for droping by and taking time off to comment here. I am happy that you liked my work.

      God bless you

      deergha

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      Olde Cashmere 4 years ago from Michigan, United States

      This is incredibly creative poetry. Loved every line. Voting up and rating beautiful, awesome, and interesting :)

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thank you @Olde Cashmere.....for stopping by and leaving your valuable comment here. Its much encouraging for me so far.

      God bless you

      deergha

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