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A Dramatic Poem: The Raven In My Eyes

Updated on February 28, 2013

As I walked down the street,

I tried to be polite and inconspicuous

You stare into my eyes;

My brown eyes speak louder than my

Husky voice ever will

What are you looking for?

Do you liked what you see

Pain, shame or a sense of connection

Love, nowhere to be found

It ruthless, it vanishes, it disappoint

By now us all know the stories

Of lost-love,

It begin with a smile

A kiss, a warm embrace,

Then tear and fears

Do you love the raven in my eyes

Sorry stranger!

I paid my tithes,


I lost my loves

Caw, caw, caw!

Do you love the raven in my eyes?


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      Frank Atanacio 5 years ago from Shelton

      wow dark this was actually really good voted awesome!

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      Annie 5 years ago from NewYork

      Thank for commenting Mhatter99

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      Martin Kloess 5 years ago from San Francisco

      Thank you for this wonderful journey. Well done.