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A Fools Lament

Updated on June 13, 2012
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A Fools Lament

By Tony DeLorger © 2012


Insurmountable, or so it seems,

these lies I've cast, these petty dreams,

when denial is all my thoughts redeem,

in truth I betray myself.


To go to lengths in pretending strengths,

to bravely smile when souls are bent,

and colour worlds all dark and spent,

to uphold the veil of acceptance.


In me the truth is hidden well,

behind convention and in murmurs swell,

I cling to hope without actions knell,

and expect the mark of deliverance.


Yet in heart I know my weakness shows,

and I a pawn to my demands so low,

to remain a victim in a life on slow,

where nothing can change at all.


For it is the starkest truth that I must grasp,

without action my hopes and dreams will laps,

and I forlorn shall stagnate, collapse,

with nothing left to lose.


It is a fools lament to circumvent,

a world so rich and heaven sent,

with eyes closed shut and mind prevent,

the reality that greets us all.


Dreams come true when followed through,

when actions take and possibilities imbue,

to realise what we truly are,

potential gift-wrapped, only doubts can mar.


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      Tony DeLorger 

      6 years ago from Adelaide, South Australia

      Thanks SkySlave, I'm glad you connected. Thanks for dropping by.

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      Skyler DeCristoforo 

      6 years ago from Olympia, WA

      I think this poem speaks for many people. Especially the beginning. I believe allot of us aren't true to themselves and then they find themselves lost along the road chasing a dream they thought they had. The brilliant line "Dreams come true when followed through" is the key to success really. Its up to you to discover and follow until you find the end, being your dream, and then its time to start dreaming bigger.

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      Tony DeLorger 

      6 years ago from Adelaide, South Australia

      With gratitude CloudExplorer; glad you enjoyed my words.

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      Mike Pugh 

      6 years ago from New York City

      Beautiful display of word powers here through poetry writing Tony, I totally enjoyed this hub, and poem.

      I also like your usage of the negative and positive themes in poetic verse and combination here, and for that you've earned my vote up. Getting shared in all the ways possible.

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      Deep Biswas 

      6 years ago from India

      I sincerely hope there is and you share. Honored to have followed you.

    • Tony DeLorger profile imageAUTHOR

      Tony DeLorger 

      6 years ago from Adelaide, South Australia

      Thanks Deep Metaphysical. A lot more where that came from.

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      Deep Biswas 

      6 years ago from India

      This drop dead gorgeous, I'm gonna share this.

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      Joshua Zerbini 

      6 years ago from Pennsylvania

      You are welcome Tony, anytime, glad I found you on HubPages!

    • Tony DeLorger profile imageAUTHOR

      Tony DeLorger 

      6 years ago from Adelaide, South Australia

      So glad you liked it, Dotty. Do drop in again.

    • Tony DeLorger profile imageAUTHOR

      Tony DeLorger 

      6 years ago from Adelaide, South Australia

      Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment, Josh.

    • Tony DeLorger profile imageAUTHOR

      Tony DeLorger 

      6 years ago from Adelaide, South Australia

      You're too kind Ashlee. Your comment much appreciated.

    • Tony DeLorger profile imageAUTHOR

      Tony DeLorger 

      6 years ago from Adelaide, South Australia

      Thanks Tim, I'm glad you were impressed. Thanks for dropping by.

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      Joshua Zerbini 

      6 years ago from Pennsylvania

      Great poem Tony!

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      dotty1 

      6 years ago from In my world

      Wonderful words used in this poem Brilliant

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      ashleeosborn 

      6 years ago

      I'm not even sure how to accurately describe what I've just read, so I'll settle for incredible writing that took my mind on a journey in just a few words.

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      Tim Mitchell 

      6 years ago from Escondido, CA

      Overwhelmed with the imagery of the poet, the illusions presented, and the possibilities. Read once, then dashed about and read a little of that one while looking at this one then another, it was mystifying.

      tim

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      Tony DeLorger 

      6 years ago from Adelaide, South Australia

      Glad you enjoyed, Debbie. Have a great day.

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 

      6 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      Tony another one of your wonderful thought provoking poems.. I love it.. I especially love these lines

      Dreams come true when followed through,

      when actions take and possibilities imbue,

      sharing

      Debbie

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