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A Haiku - Determination

Updated on March 1, 2012

Determination sometimes determines the outcome....

What makes a determined person different?
What makes a determined person different? | Source

She stuck to her goal like a pitbull.



She saw it through well.

Not stopping short of her goal,

Her end stayed in sight.


And you?

Have you seen determination overcome steep obstacles?

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      ktabbutt 5 years ago from Wisconsin

      I like this, it's pithy and hopeful

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      Sunnie Day 5 years ago

      Great Haiku!

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      Demas W Jasper 5 years ago from Today's America and The World Beyond

      Thanks, Sunny Day. What a great smile you have!

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      Demas W Jasper 5 years ago from Today's America and The World Beyond

      Ktabutt: There is indeed something "pithy and hopeful" which characterizes determination. I appreciate you checking this out and commenting.

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      P. Thorpe Christiansen 5 years ago from Pacific Northwest, USA

      Well done!

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      Karen Silverman 5 years ago

      Good for her! That kind of commitment is hard to find! Nice one...

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      picklesandrufus 5 years ago from Virginia Beach, Va

      steady determination defeats many obstacles. It is a positive personality trait. Nice job! vote up

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up! Love your Haikus they give me much food for thought. Determination is a great way to get what you deserve.

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      Demas W Jasper 5 years ago from Today's America and The World Beyond

      Could it be that because the Haiku is about "she" all of the comments are from you lovely Hubbers? The votes, comments, and feedback are all music to my ears.

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      ktabbutt 5 years ago from Wisconsin

      maybe the "lovely Hubbers" are simply more appreciative to the beauties of life? Though I'm sure anyone could appreciate this Haiku regardless of gender

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      ktabbutt 5 years ago from Wisconsin

      by "beauties" I'm referring to the beauty inherent in all forms of poetry

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      Demas W Jasper 5 years ago from Today's America and The World Beyond

      ImKarn23: Hard to find, but usually successful. Like you with a Hub you are determined to write!

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      Theresa Ast 5 years ago from Atlanta, Georgia

      I like this one. It has a solid feel to it when you say the syllables. They seem to reinforce the meaning - determination. Good Haiku.

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      Demas W Jasper 5 years ago from Today's America and The World Beyond

      phdast7: It may well be that poems are best when read aloud, making it easier for them to "speak" to you. ;o)

      Thank you for the Comment.

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