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A Haiku: Keeping Commandments

Updated on January 7, 2012

Gain all, or lose all, quite simple isn't it!

Each commandment has a blessing.  How many blessings do you want?
Each commandment has a blessing. How many blessings do you want? | Source

What is profit in regard to life?


I saw one lacking,

with naught save love for comfort.

I gave but lost not.

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      Susan Zutautas 5 years ago from Ontario, Canada

      Very thought provoking Haiku. Nicely done!

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      Sarah Johnson 5 years ago from Charleston, South Carolina

      I love this haiku, Perspycacious! May you be blessed for giving.

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      Demas W Jasper 5 years ago from Today's America and The World Beyond

      Giving of Self is the only true gift, isn't it.

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      Joyce Haragsim 5 years ago from Southern Nevada

      beautiful haiku poem. voted up.

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      kathryn1000 5 years ago from London

      I like it.

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