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A Haiku - Problems

Updated on February 23, 2015

A careless word has eternal echoes.

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Irreversible choices....


Problems come and go,

Some leave our hearts still aching.

Why? I do not know.


Wise choice is made how?

The worst are of our making.

False choices then....now.


Life? Once me and you.

So make choices wisely now.

Love demands we do.


The chance to change....gone.

The final act unforeseen,

A day with no dawn.


Impulse can betray.

Like footsteps in deep darkness,

Stumbling on today.


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© 2013 Demas W. Jasper All rights reserved.

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      wow, great poetry Perspy..

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      great one!

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      Michele Travis 4 years ago from U.S.A. Ohio

      Your poetry is wonderful. It give one emotions. Not all poets can do that.

      Voted up.

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      cre8ivOne 4 years ago from Midwest, USA

      This is a nice poem, great job!

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      Dora Isaac Weithers 4 years ago from The Caribbean

      "A day with no dawn." Exceptional. Thanks for sharing.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and beautiful. Lovely poem. When it comes to all things especially love we must choose wisely. Passing this on.

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      Michele Travis 4 years ago from U.S.A. Ohio

      A very beautiful poem.

      Voted up.

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      HLPhoenix 4 years ago

      This poem spoke to me on many levels... sometimes we don't even know that we made a choice at all...

      Problems come and go,

      Some leave our hearts still aching.

      Why? I do not know

      Beautiful, loved it. sharing.

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      Martin Kloess 4 years ago from San Francisco

      Very impressive haiku, thank you.

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      Demas W Jasper 4 years ago from Today's America and The World Beyond

      roll your tongue 10 times before speaking, while reminding yourself that "sometimes the best answer is silence."

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      Jamie Lee Hamann 4 years ago from Reno NV

      These are some very powerful Haiku stanzas. The last stanza seems to stick with me. Thank you for sharing. Jamie

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      Perspycacious 4 years ago

      jhamann: Sometimes we are seemingly just guessing where that next step will take us, while regreting each stumble along the way. Thanks.

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