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A Haiku - Spring Rain

Updated on February 24, 2015

Going and coming around....

Cycles consist of many parts of the whole.
Cycles consist of many parts of the whole. | Source

Love and Marriage...Rain and Flowers...



Rain from a dark sky,

Sprouts from loamy soil gardens.

Flowers bright with sun.


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      Victoria Lynn 5 years ago from Arkansas, USA

      Your haiku paints a picture and makes me look so forward to spring. Nicely done. Voted up, among others!

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      Demas W Jasper 5 years ago from Today's America and The World Beyond

      Thanks VL. It is a dull, grey, rainy day here today, but the mind's eye can still display the sun-brightened glories of spring. Can you close your eyes and not have it "fade to black"?

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      picklesandrufus 5 years ago from Virginia Beach, Va

      Great description of Mother natures work!

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      Sky9106 5 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      I call Haiku the wise peoples poem , and for sure you have been in that group.

      Great work .

      Bless.

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      moonlake 5 years ago from America

      Enjoyed your haiku.

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      Audrey Howitt 5 years ago from California

      This makes me long for spring flowers--but we need the rain this year so I am not complaining--nice piece!

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      reikieffect 5 years ago

      I loved your comparison of spring to love and marriage! Refreshing rain that nurtures the earth...and then the kids. Beautiful and up, sir!

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      Rebecca Mealey 5 years ago from Northeastern Georgia, USA

      Nice Haiku!Makes me long for Spring!

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      I really liked this Haiku. Looking forward to more. Made me think of spring on a gloomy, snowy day.

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 5 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      Great Haiku.. I am getting ready to try my hand with it.. I need prayer.. !! LOL.

      debbie

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      Rebecca Mealey 5 years ago from Northeastern Georgia, USA

      You are still "the King of Haiku" on Hubpages!

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      Demas W Jasper 2 years ago from Today's America and The World Beyond

      I am so thankful for each of you who add a comment of your impressions.

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