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A Hand of Cards

Updated on April 18, 2017
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Audrey is a poet, classical singer and voice teacher, recovering attorney and licensed psychotherapist.

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My #17 for National Poetry Month



he arrives, a trickster

with splinters for fingers

and marbles for eyes


be silent under his gaze

"don't attract attention,"

Momma always said.

she also told me to be careful

what i wished for.


he gleams in the dark.

marble eyes tell stories

that lips cannot taste.


so i watch,


dealing cards

across the stage

flipping them down.

pick up an ace of spades

not my best hand

but my only one.

© 2017 Audrey Howitt

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      manatita44 7 days ago from london

      Painted immaculately well. Superb!

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      Jay C OBrien 7 days ago from Houston, TX USA

      Yes, we live with the hand we are dealt, but if you play poker you learn how to bet and bluff.

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      Nithya Venkat 7 days ago from Dubai

      Great poem, we have no choice but to pick up the card and play.

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      Venkatachari M 7 days ago from Hyderabad, India

      Nice poem on the trickster card player. Need to be much attentive and careful while playing with him. BTW, if you don't mind, is it 'may' a typo in place of my in the last but one line?

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      Bill Holland 7 days ago from Olympia, WA

      There is nothing more I can write. You already know.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 7 days ago from Southern Illinois

      Playing cards can be fun, but if you have a heavy bet on the table, it' scary. an ace of spades is a good way to beat the trickster.....Huh?

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      Jamie Lee Hamann 7 days ago from Reno NV

      I think that is what helps us move forward is the compensation and creativity it takes to make that card work when it seems impossible. Jamie

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      Audrey Howitt 7 days ago from California

      Thank you for your kind words and for catching my typo Venkatachari!

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      Mark Tulin 7 days ago from Santa Barbara, California

      Most of the tricksters I know don't play cards. But they always have something up their sleeves. Nice poem.

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      Audrey Howitt 6 days ago from California

      You know Bill--the last time I tried doing the 30 poems in 30 days, I think I was a different poet--I think I am getting better!

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      FlourishAnyway 6 days ago from USA

      There's a trickster in every game. You set the scene well.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 6 days ago from Riga, Latvia

      Nice poetic reminder we must play with the cards that are dealt.

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      Audrey Howitt 5 days ago from California

      Hate the trickster! He is scary--thank you Ruby!

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      Audrey Howitt 5 days ago from California

      You have to bluff to avoid the trickster I think Jay--Thank you!

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      Shyron E Shenko 5 days ago from Texas

      So true Audrey, my grandmother (Mammaw) use to say the same thing about what I wish for.

      Blessings dear friend

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      Shyron E Shenko 5 days ago from Texas

      I don't know why the comments are not posting

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      Audrey Howitt 4 days ago from California

      Hi Shyron--you do have to be careful about what you wish for--thank you!

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      Audrey Howitt 4 days ago from California

      I like to think so too Jamie--thank you!

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      Audrey Howitt 4 days ago from California

      Thank you Manatita!

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      mckbirdbks 2 days ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

      Audrey - This is masterful.

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      Audrey Howitt 45 hours ago from California

      Thank you Vellur!

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      Audrey Howitt 45 hours ago from California

      Thank you Mark--They always have something up their sleeves!

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