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I Hunger

Updated on June 6, 2011

I want to be loved 

Anew

Like a Gypsy dancing for coins

I strive to lure

Someone

Fresh

Attention whore that I am

Always surveying the crowd 

For the next 

Ripe

Thing

Come hither sweet boy

I hunger at so many orifices

To be 

Fed

Read me, write me, this will 

Delight me

But do not please me quickly

Where’s the fun

Tempt me, ignore me 

Come again

Once you have me

Know this

Your time 

Is almost done


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    • Laughing Mom profile image

      Laughing Mom 7 years ago

      Hmmm.... a little different flavor than the last couple. Excellent, as usual. You say you have more on your desk???????

    • Randy Behavior profile image
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      Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Oh LM, did I scare you? Sorry. Several, but the next in line is tears and crap I don't like to own up to.

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      Frieda Babbley 7 years ago from Saint Louis, MO

      Well, well. How coy. So playful. I love it.

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      Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Thanks Frieda. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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      shamelabboush 7 years ago

      A masterpiece again Randy!

      Read me, write me, this will 

      Delight me.............

      What is this? You made me want and crave for this woman, wanton woman! This poem is beyond nice Randy.

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      Nancy Hinchliff 7 years ago from Louisville, Kentucky

      You are really good at this poetry thing! I like this one a lot........great rhythm and flow to it.

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      \Brenda Scully 7 years ago

      yes indeed great flow to it

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      shamelabboush 7 years ago

      I read it again! Couldn't help it!

      Thumps up!

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      Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Shamel, I'm glad you liked this one. I'm not as bad as this woman, and yet there is truth in it. Some women like hunks, I like writers.

      And thanks for coming by again! *giggle*

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      Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean

      alekhouse, Thank you so much. I've been trying to grow in the rhythm department.

      Brenda thanks for commenting. I'm always curious what other poets think.

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      Gypsy Willow 7 years ago from Lake Tahoe Nevada USA , Wales UK and Taupo New Zealand

      Love the rhythm of this poem, one of your best I think, the illustration is perfect, well done.

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      Christoph Reilly 7 years ago from St. Louis

      Just a bite then you toss them back, huh? Nicely told and a vivid picture painted with your words!

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      Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Oh wow, thanks Gypsy.

      Yep Chris, I'm a terribly fickle harlot.

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      Susan Reid 7 years ago from Where Left is Right, CA

      Love it! A little role reversal -- the hunter becomes the hunted, the thrill is in the chase, and all that usual male as pursuer stuff turned right back at them. Poor things:-). You go, girl. I hope all your orifices get fed today!! MM

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      Hawkesdream 7 years ago from Cornwall

      loved it RB , very playfully put

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      Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Thanks for your great comment MM! I only wish I had that much moxie in the flesh.

      Hawkesdream - I'm glad you enjoyed it.

      CB - Ya, aren't I just a bad ass :)

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      ledefensetech 7 years ago from Cape Girardeau, MO

      Exquisite.

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      Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Thanks for reading ledefensetech.

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      trooper22 7 years ago from Chicago

      I love this...you have been readig my mind again...IT'S NOT FAIR! It's all about the hunt, the prize and the satisfation of another fresh night of LUST.

      Woe to thee that should delight me.

      Great poem Randy! Alas that part of my life is done, I do miss the hunt however, but I do not miss the drama, the calls and the broken hearts. A man is not without emotion, love and lust can be fleeting things. I do love my wife, and there it is an ember, never to cool and always ready to burst into flame. Thanks for this Randy.

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      Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Mmmmm, I got to you Trooper. That delights me also.

      That part of my life is just beginning again. Wish me happy hunting :)

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      trooper22 7 years ago from Chicago

      You did indeed. Don't hurt the wild life...well, maybe a little :)

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      Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean

      If a speckled fawn with those big deer eyes and long lashes, gets all deer in the headlights at me and hits my grill, is it really my fault? (metaphorically speaking)

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      trooper22 7 years ago from Chicago

      ROFL! Good point, but beware, sometimes the deer may appear to be a simple herbivore, but is truly a carnivore in simple clothing.

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      Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Consider me warned ;)

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      Candie V 7 years ago from Whereever there's wolves!! And Bikers!! Cummon Flash, We need an adventure!

      Ah Randy.. It's like we're twins! Tee hee - you got the good hair, tho!! Love this one! If you find "him" ask if he has a friend.. for me.. :)

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      Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Will do Candie. I gotta stop reading Janetta's poems too. Makes me all the hungrier! LOL.

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      Am I dead, yet? 7 years ago

      Randy, omg! I wish I can write with fierce passion as well as you can. Another wonderful, and hawt read, Randy!

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      Janetta 7 years ago

      Whew...I think I need a cold shower...nicely done! :D

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      Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean

      AIDY, I've learned you have to write in the heat of it. When its gone its gone. When I get all settled down in a nice relationship again I'll probably write about grilled cheese sandwiches or something :)

      Back at ya Janetta! We are two peas in a pod.

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      d-b-ggaming 7 years ago from The land of the living

      Wow, this is pretty good, when i first started i said to myself "this isn't what im looking for" but just when i was about to hit th back button i read another line and it sucked me back in, Great job, i love it!

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      Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Glad you stuck around dbg. Curious which line "sucked" you back in.

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      Paris Injeans 7 years ago from The Green Hills of Missouri

      The only hunt left for me is to find the real me. I intend to hunt within myself for that answer...BUT...I do remember the passion that is so vivid in your words. Oh so sweet...so delectable...but not worth the calories. It's been hard dragging around the extra two hundred pounds for the last 28 years but now that he's gone I intend to stay the slimmer trimmer me. Still I am a big fan...You certainly have a way with the pen.

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      Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean

      What a wonderful comment. Yes the only prize worth really hunting is probably ones self. Try telling that to my hormones though. Good luck with your search and I hope you find peace and bliss in there waiting for you.

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      Neil Sperling 7 years ago from Port Dover Ontario Canada

      Let's Eat

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      Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Your speaking my language. Chop sticks?

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      7 years ago from East Coast Canada

      Deadlier with your pen than you are in those profile pic jeans.

      I purge myself. I cannot read poem after poem of these lust filled emotions.... you Miss have captured rapture by the tail.

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      Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean

      If this is true, I expect a lot more comments from you, attention whore that I am.

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      7 years ago from East Coast Canada

      Still wading the waters of hubpages... slowly commenting where I see fit.. keep writing I am sure I'll have more to say

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      Kimberly Bunch 7 years ago from EAST WENATCHEE

      That was fun! Great poem!!

      Kimberly ~

      http://hubpages.com/hub/higherconsciousness

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      Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean

      I'm glad you like it Kimberly.

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      Sabrina Beachgurl 7 years ago from Ocean City, MD

      Wow ~ and " JUST DAMN " you rock gurl ! I love it !

      And i loved all the comments you recieved ~

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      Seldon55 7 years ago from Somewhere in Florida

      So, do you have to get restraining orders against all of the "Next, ripe things" whose time is done? I could see this character followed by bus loads of pining men, wanting to be used and domped yet again...E

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      Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Sabrina I love your comment. Made me grin.

      Seldon, I'm not sure how to answer this one. I think I'll just smile coyly.

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      BenWritings 6 years ago from Save me from, Tennessee

      I've read you, and you delight me.

      Now what?

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      Randy Behavior 6 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Write! write young poet.

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      Doug Turner Jr. 6 years ago

      One of my favorite qualities of your writing is the brutal honesty. Most artists probably possess this desire to lure in new fans and admirers, to engulf everyone in the whole world, yet few would speak so candidly on the subject.

      Juicy stuff. The last lines reminded me of a Metallica song lyric from way back when I could stand to listen to them; something to the effect of: "just as soon as I belong, then it's time I disappear."

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      Randy Behavior 6 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Oh I like those lyrics Doug. I've been told quite often then I write honestly. I just don't know another way to do it.

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