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A Journey Into Me

Updated on March 2, 2011

A Journey Into Me

Life is a grand adventure
to charted lands unknown
and I so love exploring...
beyond my comfort zone...
the world is my grand oyster
that beckons unto me...
it's a pearl diver's paradise...
like a voyage to Capri!
There is so much to see and do
such possibility...
on Life's grand adventure...
this journey into me!

"Copyright 2011, All Rights Reserved."


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      vietnamvet68 6 years ago from New York State

      I hope you have a wonderful journey through life.I love it and voted it UP.

      God Bless

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      janbee 6 years ago

      "Awesome" ....Will be a pleasure to share a part of life's journey along with you ! Up & Awesome ,friend !(((HUGS)))

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      Robert Elias Ballard 6 years ago from Zirconia, North Carolina

      Tremendous poem Voting up and beautiful

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      tnderhrt23 6 years ago

      viettnamvet, thank you...I hope the same for you!

      janbee, thank you! Hugs to you too!

      Thank you, Fiddleman!

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      Randy Behavior 6 years ago from Near the Ocean

      I note that you used "in" not "without" nice!

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      tnderhrt23 6 years ago

      Thanks, Randy! This was a fun one!

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      bbnix 6 years ago from Southern California

      And what a fantastic journey it is my friend.

      This is a nice postcard of a poem...worth framing indeed!

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      tnderhrt23 6 years ago

      bbnix, I just love your comments! They are like spring!

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      bbnix 6 years ago from Southern California

      A global spring is truly here my dear friend...:)

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      Kathi 6 years ago from Saugatuck Michigan

      Awesome, "the world is my grand oyster", reading this has been a lovely way to start my day! thank you dear lady

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      tnderhrt23 6 years ago

      All smiles here, bbnix and Fossillady! Thank you!!!

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      Xavier Nathan 6 years ago from Isle of Man

      Hope and happiness shines brightly through your words in this poem. The lights have been switched on and the darkness scurries for cover. Bon voyage!

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      Denizee 6 years ago

      Amazing poem which I enjoyed very much! Kudos to you!

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      Christina M. Castro 6 years ago from Baltimore,MD USA

      Aww! This is really sweet- as you!:)

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      Doug Turner Jr. 6 years ago

      A fun little diddy with a subtle nod to Shakespeare and his oyster. Keep up the great words, tnder. I know you will.

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      tnderhrt23 6 years ago

      Spirit Whisperer, yes, the light is on! I found the oars and sail on! Thank you, my friend!

      Denizee, thank you! I am pleased that you liked it!

      Christina, thanks. I so appreciate you!

      Doug, I am grateful for your great support! I shall try!

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      cwarden 6 years ago from USA

      Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing it.

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      azure_sky 6 years ago from Somewhere on the Beach, if I am lucky :)

      I love this!! Thanks so much for sharing! Up and Beautiful :)

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      Stacy Harris 6 years ago from Hemet, Ca

      Great poem... you definately have that flair for poetry as well. It had so much flow to it! LOVED IT!

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      tnderhrt23 6 years ago

      cwarden, you are most welcome! Thank you for taking the time to read it and comment!

      azure, again, thank you!

      barbergirl, I am I said, when you can pen a poem that writes itself, you have the gift! and Girl, you got it! The emotional release and self-discovery alone is worth the effort, not to mention the joy it brings to your readers...write! Hugs!

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      Desadi 6 years ago from Marietta, Ga

      Yes life is a pearl a beautiful gem created from constant irritation. This poem expresses that to me so clearly!

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      tnderhrt23 6 years ago

      LoL, Desadi! I had not thought of the constant irritation being what forms the oyster but that is most appropriate! Thanks for that!

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      Plarson 6 years ago from Alabama

      Tndr- One day I will embark on the journey to find myself, but that ticket hasn't been bought yet. lol -Paul

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      tnderhrt23 6 years ago

      Paul, when you buy that ticket, be sure, my friend, to buckle up and hold on have just been issued "the call to bliss"! Can't wait to read about your journey!!! Hugs!

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