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A Lot Of Wildness

Updated on October 17, 2012

Un break her heart

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She was walking down the street

Looking into the future

Seeing the dreams that would be foretold,

Not knowing things would be bleak!


Not seeing the pain of the night.

“Would you like to ride my dear?”

She was just a young thing

He had just came from the local bar!


Trying to find her way home!

But the night and the day was done.

Not watching where she was going,

Crying her tears of sorrow!


He told her so much,of hope, the lies of many

It says on the News that she was gone for sure;

The day she left was not new.

She was crying in the here and now!


The night had come and so dark

Lighting hiding the emotional promise

Of death to surely come

As her heart break was to much to bear!


When is something truly alive?

When it becomes afraid to die

One day a long time ago

It just stopped when she said goodbye!


When she thought she was in control

To get free

It was time

For one of them to see!


To find the key

The air was different

The girls are gone

No where to be found!



Plunged a need in her soul

With the form of metal

Born of flesh

One simple need of both!



Conforms the need for life

The unquenchable need for freedom

Was their Strive!


There were so many nights

Flashing in her eyes’

As the light was fading fast

She had been running hoping to say goodbye!


The loss was too much

For the loss of her life

Would be great

The pain was so muck!


Brain waves faint

With her life in the balance

With the body alive

The brain has died!


She was alone before

Now she really is gone

She belonged to no one

As she had rushed out the door!


She was pushed to madness in the crazy world!


With her pretty songs

Her words full of love

That was not long for this world

As she slipped away!

Cry cry cry

By: Debbie Brooks

©Copyright 2012 by Poet - Deborah Brooks-Langford, Debbie, or Deborah Brooks. Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used for re-distribution, provided that full and clear credit is given to Deborah Brooks-Langford, Debbie, or Deborah Brooks with appropriate and specific direction to the original content. All rights reserved. Any violation or infringement of this copyright notice will be prosecuted to the fullest extent of the law.

Music by Oceana

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      DDE thank you I appreciate that .. many blessings today

      Debbie

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      Devika Primić 4 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      Truly amazing I am quite impressed with your talent and such a story in a poem. Liked and voted up!!!

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      xstatic it is a sad story that happens all the time.. blessings

      Debbie

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      Jim Higgins 4 years ago from Eugene, Oregon

      Sad story too often repeated, protection is needed by all who are young and vulnerable.

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      Faith

      Denise

      Sue..

      thank you all for visiting and commenting

      many blessings

      Debbie

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      Sueswan 4 years ago

      Hi Debbie,

      "Plunged a need in her soul

      With the form of metal

      Born of flesh

      One simple need of both!"

      Painful imagery. Wonderful writing.

      Voted up and away

      Take care :)

      Take care :)

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      Denise Handlon 4 years ago from North Carolina

      Boy can you tell a story with your poetry! Whew...this was great. Enjoyed!

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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      Very sad one here, not wanting to live. The time we have left, none of us knows, but we must enjoy each moment we have as if it were our last, as it may very well be. Voted Way Up Good to see you back again!

      God bless. In His Love, Faith Reaper

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      Eddy thank yous friend,.. God Bless you

      Debbie

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Wonderful and brimming over with emotion.

      Enjoy your day and keep these gems coming.

      Eddy.

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      Laurinzo nice to see you and I thank you my friend.

      God Bless you

      Debbie

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      Live To Write 5 years ago from Phoenix, Az.

      Lovely poem Deborah... and I always find beauty in your poetry. Even sadness can be beautiful; because if the writer expresses, and brings out an emotional response it is beautiful.

      You have did this much... great poem my friend!!!!

      Laurinzo

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 5 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      Mike thank you dear friend for sharing

      Debbie

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      Mike Pugh 5 years ago from New York City

      Lovely poem even though it ended in such a sad way for the lady, such a decrepit end indeed, but the beauty and love of life is in your poetry for sure I can sense the vibe your putting out.

      Thumbs up Debbie and sharing with the community.

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 5 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      Sparklea thank you. I want to live too. what is the name of the book ?

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      Sparklea 5 years ago from Upstate New York

      Voted UP, very heart wrenching and profound. It sure makes me think...hard, about the art of living. I just read a book where the author pens, 'I want to LIVE, TRULY LIVE!' One of the best books I have read. I just know, for myself, I must embrace every second of the gift of life and be so very thankful for every new day. VERY sad for someone to get into this type of sadness. Blessings Sparklea

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 5 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      Till

      Leslie

      love doctor

      thank you all .. many blessings to you.. you all are so special

      Debbie

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      lovedoctor926 5 years ago

      Good imagery and poem full of emotion.

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      Karen Silverman 5 years ago

      My friend, this is...heart-wrenching and hard - almost like a slap in the face!

      Such lonely desolation in life - and in death!

      "When is something truly alive? When it becomes afraid to die" - A devastating question...one which i hope is not true for all!

      If one appreciates life and living - then perhaps one is not quite AS afraid to die? hmmmm...

      You know i must share this jewel..hugzzzzzxx

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      Mary Craig 5 years ago from New York

      How sad for our young girl...seems like a violent and yet lonely end. Must be the time of year for sad and introspective poems, we'll blame Halloween. Either way, it was beautifully done and leaves the reader thinking, one of the best things a poem can do.

      Voted up, awesome, and interesting.

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 5 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      shining eyes.. thank you my friend

      many blessings

      Debbie

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      Shining Irish Eyes 5 years ago from Upstate, New York

      Debbie - This grabbed my attention and I am sharing it. It is a perfect way to get the message out to so many.

      Voting up as well

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 5 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      Joyce it didnt start out like that.. lol.

      I guess I am in a wierd mood... thanks for voting up

      debbie

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      Joyce Haragsim 5 years ago from Southern Nevada

      A true sad story just like Franks.

      Vote up and awesome, Joyce