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A Love That Still Shines

Updated on March 28, 2015

Come take my hand

and let me lead you

through the years we’ve shared

let me know the love is still there

sitting side by side

in golden silence

my hand in yours

like a little bird trembles

I try to pick up your thoughts

but they’re not with me

my heart feels a chill

that seems to be all around

can you tell me

that our love can survive

when each day

we seem to no longer have something to say

where have the smiles

of yesterday gone

the days of you and I

and sweet memorable kisses

your eyes still sparkle and shine

but does that mean you are still mine

have I lost your heart

perhaps in another place and time

we still dance beneath the moon and the stars

only now when you hold me

it no longer feels the same

tell me you love me along with my name

in dreams I see us as we were

so full of hope, so full of love

together we were as one

and so much in love

seeking comfort I sifted through the memories

so many pictures

that told the story as it should be

the two of us through eternity

then there you were

your arms full of roses

a single rose for each year of our love

and one for the next shining one

it was then that I realized

our love was very much alive

the passion of your kisses

and complete devotion in the starry night

© 2015 Gypsy Rose Lee


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      Eric Dierker 2 years ago from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A.

      Beautifully done, thank you

    • Marcy Goodfleisch profile image

      Marcy Goodfleisch 2 years ago from Planet Earth

      Very sweet sentiments - and heartfelt! This is timely for Valentine's Day. Thanks for sharing your talent with us!

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      Venkatachari M 2 years ago from Hyderabad, India

      Very beautiful lines. A good presentation of the feelings of a lover. Thanks for sharing it.

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      Smilealot 2 years ago

      There is nothing like a bunch of roses to bring back the spark to a said it very well:-))

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      Bill Holland 2 years ago from Olympia, WA

      This lovely poem reminds me to never take love for granted. It is, after all, the most important thing in life.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 2 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      You welcome Eric.

      You welcome Marcy.

      Glad you enjoyed this Venkatachari.

      Thank you Smilealot.

      So true Bill. Love is most important and it can still be true even if we doubt. The important thing is what is in our hearts.

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      Shauna L Bowling 2 years ago from Central Florida

      Rasma, when the light is still seen in the eyes, that light is fueled by love. Couples who stand the test of time lose some of the giddiness, but a tremendous comfort ensues in its place.

      When love is no longer a trial, it becomes real and lasts forever.

      This poem epitomizes true love.

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 2 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      As time passes and life becomes busy sometimes we take each other for granted and then wonder if the love is there still. Love your poem, especially the happy ending.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 2 years ago from Southern Illinois

      I swear I love this, one more of my favorite songs...

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      Mary Hyatt 2 years ago from Florida

      You wrote a beautiful poem here. I like happy endings.

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      manatita44 2 years ago from london

      Loyalty and devotion in the starry night indeed! Now moving closer the originals. Cool. Truly sentimental music.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 2 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Thank you Shauna. Yes, a true love always shines.

      Happy endings are always the best Blossom.

      Thank you Ruby. One of my favorites too.

      Thank you Mary.

      Thank you Manatita.

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      Jamie Lee Hamann 2 years ago from Reno NV

      Sometimes my wife and I sit (usually over ice cream) and just think about all the years. So lovely Gypsy. Thank You. Jamie

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 2 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      You welcome Jamie. Nice tradition to sit and think over the years.

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