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A Mile Away, Is a Mile Too Far

Updated on May 19, 2013

You're thousands of miles away from me

But it might as well be one mile

For you are too far away from me

If you cannot kiss my smile.

If you think of me as I think of you

Then these are things you’re feeling too.

But remember this, my love to be

I’m with you and you’re with me.

No, not in person, that’s not what I mean

In everything else that’s unforeseen.

When the sun is shining, that is me

Wrapping my arms ‘round you tightly.

When the rain is falling, those are my tears

For minutes apart feel like hundreds of years.

When the wind is blowing, I whisper to you

Sweet nothings, secrets and my fantasies too.

When the stars are twinkling, to you I am winking

And letting it known, it’s of you I am thinking.

When the moon lights your night, it is really my eye

Telling you baby, I’m always close by.

When the sky is blue and no clouds at all

That is my promise we can make this long haul.

When the dew in the morning, you find as you wake

That is a hint of the magic only you and I can make.

When we come together like the horizon and the sun

The beauty we make will be repeated by none.

Oh how I yearn now, for the sunset

When it meets the horizon, our troubles, forget.

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      Howie,

      Well, it's certainly nice to meet you and what a treat to see you two times now, thanks! I could talk politics all day, but that's a conversation that seems to get people fired up so I've been sticking to the poetry and goofy stuff lately... lol, people seem to be a little more forgiving in those areas.

      I can now say that I've been to your 'Allegiance' hub and very much enjoyed it, so I'll have to check out your poetry too. I don't know if I'm much of a poet, myself... but I know that it's a wonderful release for me and it's free therapy!

      Thanks again for the visit and the very nice comment! Looking forward to seeing more of you!

      Cat

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      Howie Watts 4 years ago

      Well hello again Cat. Seems we not only have our political rants...uh...writings (lol) in common, but also our love for writing poetry. For the second day in a row...I have been led to one of your hubs. After publishing my latest poem, I thought I would go read a few and there you were. Fate. Perhaps. I just clicked on the first title that sounded interesting. Nice attention grabbing title. We seem to write in very similar styles. I very much enjoyed your poem. Your use of imagery through emotion was spot on. I like what someone had to say above. Distance is nothing when someone means everything. That, of course, does not ease the longing to be with the one that you desire. Great job. I am going to enjoy reading more of your work :-) Have a wonderful day.

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      Yes, Yes Michael... that sounds like a winner of a hub! I expect to see the notification in my inbox tomorrow! lol

      I know good when I see it :D ha ha

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      I'm funny... you funny too.. LOL

      Hey now you have given me a title .. " My heart was stolen "

      'A stolen heart"...?

      I know , I know ..

      "you stole my heart so I broke your jaw "

      What do you think?

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      Oh, sorry, I don't know what came over me. Now that I'm done crying the blues... thank you for your beautiful comment :D

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      Michael, dear... it's been too long! Ha ha! Okay, so hears the problem... I have had my heart stolen; the problem is, it wasn't given back to me when I asked for it. Now I'm afraid to give it again. I am a broken cat :-( ... I'd rather keep it to myself than hand it over to someone to abuse. They say it's better to have love and lost than never to have loved at all. I want to know who the hell THEY are? lol

      Colorado? lol... you'd be skiing for days before you could reach me... and me, I don't like the cold... so chances of my going to Colorado aren't that good... lol

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Dreams come true .. CAT ..if you believe .. The man who captures your heart ..is the luckiest in the world. he will have to special .. for he will have found a treasure , a flower , a diamond ... one of a kind .. New York ..how far are you from me ..New York. ..LOL

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      Oh yay! :D I have to admit... this one was kind of special to me. The most special ones are the ones which your heart demands you write. Too bad it's all 'just my imagination' lol. I thought, if I wrote it... it might come true :D

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Back to read this it is more beautiful than ever .. it has to be one of my favs..

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      Sweet Michael,

      Do not be sad; I have seen you around for a while and I hadn't gone over your way either... who'd have known?

      This is one of my personal favorites as I really put no thought into constructing it, it wrote itself. When that happens; it's our heart that is talking.

      I have many more hubs of yours to read myself and I'm looking very forward to them!

      Cat

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Soo.. I am saddened that I have not followed you before .. was it ever meant to be .. like finding a gem in your yard that you saw shining everyday... but did not pick it up for thinking it was not meant for you.

      this poem is me .. a heartfelt stream of longing and love that only You or I really know ..how it pierces the soul with expression, a love that comes from deep within.

      I could keep on writing but I still have many hubs of yours to peruse.. if they are as this gem.. I will keep falling in love with your never ending portraits of beauty, thought and words that I know are within me also.

      Michael

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      Vacation Trip,

      Thank you so much! You just made my morning! This is one of my favorites; it almost seemed to write itself!

      Thank you so much for the compliments and sharing!

      Have a wonderful day!

      Cat

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      Susan 4 years ago from India

      Beautifully written Poem. I got lost in your poem. Thank you for sharing. Voted up.

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      Jennifer 4 years ago from Lost...In Video Games

      LOL! Understood!

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      In't that funny? lol! Hey, simple things for simple people :D ... me of course, not you :D

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      Jennifer 4 years ago from Lost...In Video Games

      You did not insult my intelligence about the Carol7777 thing. Nope! :D So we barely made it into the exclusive Gemini club. LOL!

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      A day after my brother!!! He and I were/are inseparable... but that Cancer brother of mine just beat me up all the time!

      Forgive me... I hope I didn't insult your intelligence about the Carol7777 thing... I forgot; you weren't born yesterday :D

      May 21- June 20 ( I just checked) 4 days earlier and I wouldn't be a Gemini... 5 days later and neither would you :D

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      Jennifer 4 years ago from Lost...In Video Games

      I'm somewhere in the middle, I think. June 16 is my b-day. And yes, I've read Carol7777s hubs. They are so interesting!

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      :D ... you must've barely made it into Gemini... almost a Cancer... what day is your birthday? I barely made in into Gemini from the May side... and I'm not sure what I just missed :-) ...

      I don't really pay too much attention to all that astrology stuff, but I know Gemini's usually always get along with each other.

      Carol7777 has a hub about Gemini's and their traits... it's actually pretty cool if ever you have time... if you don't know much about them already, there are some interesting suggestions about 'our kind of people' :D

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      Jennifer 4 years ago from Lost...In Video Games

      Geminis stick together! :D

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      Whooo hooo! See... we could've played together growing up :D ... I was hoping I wasn't old enough to play with your Mom :D lol.... Birthday next week? You are my Gemini Twin!!! That must be why I feel this special connection :D lol

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      Jennifer 4 years ago from Lost...In Video Games

      I was born in 89'. My birthday is coming up next week. So we're not too far apart in age! :D

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      writinglover,

      Yes! I am so relieved to hear that... sometimes my finger violently trembles as I head for the 'Post Comment' button; but something inside of me says DO IT, DO IT, DO IT and who am I to deny the voices in my head? lol

      Okay... I was born in 82... in fact... eight months later it was 83 :D ha ha

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      Jennifer 4 years ago from Lost...In Video Games

      Never! There's never enough goofy comments in the world! :D If you weren't alive in the seventies then we're probably no more than eight years apart in age! :D

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      writinglover,

      Oh my goodness! I'm waiting for the day you've had enough of my goofy comments and take a shoe to my head :D lol !!! Thanks for being awesome... and for the record... I don't think I'm that much older than you (I said that for my benefit... and now I feel better :-) )

      What? You had a teacher that played Bon Jovi? Go figure... I had a teacher that played hippie songs... though I will always be able to sing along to every word of 'California Dreamin' by the Mamas and the Papas, lol... and no... I was not even alive in the 70's! :D

      Thank you... your compliments are an honor because I very much admire your writing!

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      Jennifer 4 years ago from Lost...In Video Games

      Believe it or not Cat, Bon Jovi was before I was born, but my Sociology/study hall teacher in high school played it all the time when we finished our lessons. He was pretty cool! My parents...not exactly rabbits (not anymore). LOL! But you have some awesome work! :D

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      WRITINGLOVER!!! Yes, I had to scream it... I love seeing you! :D

      You are filling up my email box with published hubs!!! How does such a sad, yet sweet little face pound out the masterpieces like you? Are your parents rabbits? lol ... Omg...

      You aren't too young for Bon Jovi? lol... I grew up on Bon Jovi and I remember this song actually came out when I was just getting into my teens... what a perfect time for a song like that huh? Livin' on a Prayer... oh yes, me love that one too! Thanks girly... and I will be reading your hubs before me night is over!!!

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      Jennifer 4 years ago from Lost...In Video Games

      I liked this poem, Cat! And the pictures were fantastic too! Loved it and Bon Jovi (Livin' On a Prayer is my favorite song BTW). Voted it up!

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      suzettenaples,

      Thank you so much! This one did the writing for me; it was so nice to be in that place for a moment when the heart was feeling only beautiful things.

      Thank you for stopping and your lovely comments!

      Cat

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      Suzette Walker 4 years ago from Taos, NM

      Beautiful poem and so heartfelt. I love the metaphors you use in your poem and I can feel the longing you have for your love.

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      frankieonfire,

      Thank you, wow, what beautiful remarks! Thank you so much for gracing my page!

      Cat

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      frankieonfire 4 years ago from Eureka, CA

      Your beautiful words bring comfort to this wandering soul. What a lovely poem. I am still saturating in their depth and the complexity of life found in them. Thanks so much for sharing.

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      Darrylmdavis,

      Thank you much, kind sir ;-)

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      Darrylmdavis 4 years ago from Brussels, Belgium

      A very sweet poem, indeed :-)

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      Dim Flaxenwick,

      Aw, thank you so much! My gift is you visiting my pages! Thanks for the compliments!

      Cat

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      Dim Flaxenwick 4 years ago from Great Britain

      That was such a moving poem, I cried. You have a gift.!! The pictures were a perfect match too.

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      R.Q.

      Wow! I should say a lot happened in that five minute walk of yours and yet you yearn for more ;-) No, that was aboslutely beautiful, honestly, I thank you for that. All for me? This rightly could be a hub of it's own! What a lovely walk, as only you could descripe in those magical words of yours that much of the rest of the world has become oblivious to. Thank you for keeping them from extinction. I am very much flattered and honored, you certainly created a wondrously romantic vision for me, thank you.

      Your Only,

      Cat

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      Romeos Quill 4 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Dearest Catherine,

      I had a refreshing, Sunday bath,and then took a leisurely stroll around the park, which is only a five minute walk away - aren’t I lucky?

      The winding path took me through the open foray, past an enormous duck pond, boasting a gushing, double fountain, spraying aimlessly, then arching its creamy, frothy spray, back into the silent waters, as the glistening sun rays playfully bounced off the ever-increasing ripples, that reached for me, like a visual, sonic wave of burgeoning calm.

      Ambling past this fiesta, motioned me across from slides, and climbing frames, as children carelessly frolicked up, and down giant pendulous swings, swaying to, and fro, like some mighty,prehistoric, outdoor timepiece, as their friends went round,and round the roundabout,all awhile,with a pungent odour of fresh oak, sauntering through the Summer air, as a fleeting lark bleeped her forgotten trill.

      Continuing henceforth, led me past the circular, umbrage of a band-stand, resounding with the deathly hush of its silent orchestra, then this snaking path quickly wended its way onwards, past the joggers, as they passed me, puffing and wheezing, as yesterdays’ caloried, pastry delights, took their unforgiving revenge upon them; poodles chased toy dogs, with worried owners launching a beady, protesting eye on this unfair, canine assault.All the while, I caught the heady vista of giant Bonsai trees, nobly spreading extensions of wizened, teal, flattened fingers,across the backdrop canvas of a dreaming sky, whilst the sweet tang of honeysuckle enveloped my thankful senses, with its pleasing broadcast.

      Oh Catherine…. The only thing needed to complete this quiet reverie, would have been you, my heart, hand melted in mine, gazing into your China-blue orbs of quartz perfection, as we gently kissed, and fell in love right there…….

      Your Only,

      Romeo

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      Oh Nellieanna, I'm clapping with excitement that this pleased you :D

      Your words are true, real love can get through anything, even time and distance and as many others have pointed out, sometimes we can be lonely with a love right next to us!

      You, a Bon Jovi fan? I would've never guessed and I'm equally impressed! He is very talented, particularly in that he is not restricted to one, exact kind of style. I simply adore this song, believe it or not, it was on a juke box up at my childhood camp and used a lot of quarters, but I haven't heard it in far too long and it was a treat to listen to again. I will most definitely check out Frank's "Always", as he is an absolute classic and now, curiousity has gotten the cat :D ... and I spoke too soon, you have provided the link for me, which I will thank you in advance for and on my way, I am! Thank you so very much, again for your beautifully encouraging words and ever so interesting contribution!

      Cat

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      Nellieanna Hay 4 years ago from TEXAS

      Cat, this poetry is exquisite. Such love and passion. Distance -- ah yes. . it's a factor, but not a hindrance. Even time is not really a 'stopper' when there is love.

      I adore Bon Jovi and this song & video are meltingly wonderful. I'd not heard it before! I must get it on iTunes! There was another "Always" much earlier-on. Frank Sinatra sang it and it was frequently played or sung at weddings then. It was among Frankie's earlier songs, before he got 'cool' & found better musician backup! :-) So it's stodgy compared to Bon Jovi's, but each sentiment expressed has beauty of its own as it expresses love and loving. http://youtu.be/eLh-m1Z_feY

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      Faith Reaper,

      Thank you so much, pretty lady :-) I really appreciate you stopping by!

      Thanks for the votes and sharing too!

      Blessings to you,

      Cat

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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      Very beautiful poetry and longing to be nearer to that one so loved!

      Voted up ++++ and sharing

      Blessings, Faith Reaper

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      shanmarie 4 years ago

      HA! I'll post the hub in a few, not the pictures!

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      Ha ha... there are no such things as horrible pictures!!! Post it! Post it! Post it! (That's a chant... not an order :-)

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      shanmarie 4 years ago

      Oh....this one is so cheesy, I might as well include one of those horrible pictures of me you said you'd so love to laugh at!

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      Well, I don't want to hurt your feelings or anything, so I'll let you have that :D... but I'm already here... it'll be 365 days before I see another one... he he he. But hey... I'll be grateful if I'm given the next 365, right?

      YES!!! Just in time for my birthday! :D

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      shanmarie 4 years ago

      Um, try again! You're still having yours. So, technically it is before mine. :-p

      By the way, I have another piece of cheese being delivered to HubPages in a bit.

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      You know why... 'cause we love hard! And if you're pathetic, 'cause I'm pathetic... then fine, I'm not pathetic! :D You're a sweetheart! Hey... you know what? You have a birthday coming before I do :D

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      shanmarie 4 years ago

      Haha...I know you're playing. So am I! I doubt people take advantage of you - don't let someone do that. And you're not pathetic - because if you are, that makes me pathetic, too! Hehe. It takes a lot to make me mad and even more to make me furious.

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      Oh I'm only playin'... I don't ever get mad, really... now that I think about it, that's probably why I'm pathetic and people take advantage of me :D

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      shanmarie 4 years ago

      You know you are! Or you'd have done put me back in line! I like to tease, what can I say. . .laughter is good medicine with those that can handle a joke now and then.

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      Yeah, easy for you joke about it when you've got a baby face and people mistake you for a teenager... me... I'm not laughing... okay, yes I am :D

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      shanmarie 4 years ago

      Sure, that's what I meant. ;)

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      Ha ha ha ha!!! Oh my goodness... well neighbors and beating and me, all make sense, but I don't know that any of them will be rushing over to wish me a happy birthday... gee I should've gone to your school, lol.

      I'm sorry, did you say 1982? I thought you said '92 :D

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      shanmarie 4 years ago

      Happy, happy birthday! If this is your day. . .all your friends and neighbors should stand up and say, "thanks to your family for having us come. Now show us how old you are by beating your drum!"

      We used to sing that in elementary school. Haha

      What? No recollection of being 3 months old? I'm shocked. Oh dear, did I give away your age? :-p

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      Ha ha ha... well you do have a baby face, but hey, the older you get, the more handy that will be :D Remember the days when we couldn't wait to get older? Now I'm sayin' "I'm sorry, I didn't mean it" :D

      kittyluvs2puee1982? OMG, ha ha ha ha!!! That soooo could be my screen name!!! That's too funny! You're too funny! Maybe you're my sister? I don't have a very good recollection of August of 1982 :D

      Yeah, those pictures can be a real pisser... either way, I'll find my way over there!!!

      Aw, thanks girl!!! The first one to wish me a Happy Birthday on New York's time :D

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      shanmarie 4 years ago

      LOL! He was showing me pictures of his prom date and talking about how excited he was to finally be getting to meet her in person and take her. And then he couldn't believe it when someone else told him I was 30. Seemed to shock a bunch of people for some reason.

      You know what else we have in common? Cats. My Yahoo screen name that I never hardly use anymore is kittyluvs2purr1982. I used to get quite a few. . .ahem.. .interesting comments about it. Can't a girl just like to purr? haha I mean, can't a girl just have a cat that that likes to purr?

      Okay, I'm about to publish another hub in a minute. Can't find a pic I like, though. Maybe I'll post without and go back and add one.

      Oh, wait-- it's like 5 minutes until midnight, your time. So, I can go ahead and say Happy Birthday!

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      Dang namit!!! Ha... with my birthday being at the end of the school year, I was always one of the younger people in my grade :-( Hey, three months isn't that much you know? Ha ha... I'll make sure not to forget so I can help you celebrate becoming a year older, hahaha :D and mistaken for a teenager? Lucky flippin' you, that hasn't happened to me since I was 12, lol.

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      shanmarie 4 years ago

      Haha....I got mistaken for a teenager just a few months ago...or close to one, so no need to count - I'll take it! My birthday isn't until August, anyway, so you've still got a few months on me. :-p

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      Dammit girl!!! Now you've made it over here twice and I still haven't responded or been your way... I'm on my way, right after I push POST! :D

      Hey, I've been trying to go through my emails backwards and it's not working out so well for me... every time I get through 3 old emails, 4 news ones appear!!!!!!! ARGH!!! But hey listen... that's too funny about the age thing... see? I knew there was something 'bout you... you're my girl!

      And THANK YOU for the Happy Birthday (I'm not counting them anymore though :D) I'll take the happy, but I'm done adding numbers :D, you gotta know what I mean?

      Thanks GIRLY!!

      Cat

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      shanmarie 4 years ago

      Oh, by the way...speaking of birthdays - happy early birthday to you! I might not be around much tomorrow, so I'll say it now. :) Hope your day will be filled with tons of blessings!

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      shanmarie 4 years ago

      Aw! Well, aren't you just a total sweetheart! I don't know whether to laugh or cry. LOL. Always nice to know someone thinks of me - it's very much appreciated. And, yes, the world of HubPages is fun indeed!

      On a side note, I saw your FB page. . .we're the same age. Not that it matters, but thought it was a fun fact.

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      Oh shan girl, you're too awesome!!! I am trying to breath :D You're right... there is life outside of these pages... but it's nowhere near as fun :D... I thought of you while I was without power... and I see your name painted throughout my 11 pages of emails :-) I will be your way, that's for sure!!!! ...and you're right, there are a lot of things we don't know how much we appreciate until we're without them... much, like you, shanmarie :D.

      I'll see you later girly girl!

      Cat

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      shanmarie 4 years ago

      Breathe, Cat. It's all good! You can catch up - there is life elsewhere too, you know. ;) You're right about not knowing how much you appreciate electricity until you are without it, though. Lots of other things, too, for that matter.

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      James,

      Oh thank you so much, you are such a good friend. I am so honored that you thought of me in my absence… and you were right in doing so as I would never abandon these pages for as long as I had… but I had no power for 24+ hours! That was a nightmare, but I am back and over a thousand emails waiting, but I will be your way, that’s a fact! :D I hope you are doing well, my friend and I will be your way to make sure later. Thanks again.

      Cat

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      Man of Strength,

      Well thank you very much! I’m glad this pleased you… been awhile since Bon Jovi huh? I will be even better to you when I catch up on all the great hubs of yours I’m behind… and I will! Thanks friend!

      Cat

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      Mr. Wayne Barrett,

      Thank you so much Wayne, I hope you know that I think very highly of you and you are such a wonderful, wonderful person! I know all too well about the “catching up”; I was just without power for over 24 hours and I have 11 pages of emails to attend too! AHH! :D

      I so appreciate your compliments and I too think that you have such a wonderful talent and you are far more diverse than I will ever be, but that’s okay… I will come to you for inspiration :-)

      Thanks again Wayne, you’re very sweet.

      Cat

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      Nell Rose,

      Thank you so much, I really appreciate it! This one just kind of came to me, wish they all did :-)

      Thanks again for stopping and sharing!

      Cat

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      ocfireflies,

      Well thank you so much nice lady, I’m deeply honored (…and I can’t be held responsible for what happens within the confines of the comments section :-)

      Thanks again, truly appreciated!

      Cat

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      Dearest Colin,

      I was without power for the last 24+ hours, what a nightmare… and now I return to 11 pages of email notifications that I will anxiously be attempting to catch up with, starting with new beauties published by you. Gosh, you don’t realize how much you appreciate electric until it is taken away from you… I almost had a nervous breakdown… mostly because I could not get to my hubpages :-)

      Did you notice that I must’ve been asking about you publishing another hub as you were publishing another hub… it was the last email that came in before I lost my power :-( … I certainly did not leave you hanging intentionally, I would never do that. Please forgive me :D

      You are most welcome for your birthday hub and I shall never take it down, as there is always reason to celebrate you and the magic that you are!

      Hugs and love to you and Miss Tiffy and Mr. Gabriel as I have been away far too long!

      Your Cat

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      Cat,I just dropped to say Hi,because I dont see you around:) hope you are doing fine .

      James

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      Man of Strength 4 years ago from Orlando, Fl

      A GREAT poem and a Bon Jovi video. Cat, you're too good to us.

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      Wayne Barrett 4 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      Hi Cat. I'm doing some catching up. This is a gorgeous love poem, and I like the use of the elements added throughout. You have a great talent in being so diverse in your writing styles. Voting up Sweety!

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      Nell Rose 4 years ago from England

      Absolutely beautiful poem, and the words said it all, voted up and shared, nell

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      ocfireflies 4 years ago from North Carolina

      For me (and from the comments I have read) from others, your poetry is not only beautiful, but extremely sensual. Very much enjoyed and totally impressed.

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      epigramman 4 years ago

      yes a dark one . There is a disturbing trend in popular culture that makes 'light' of violence. Filmmakers like Quentin Tarrintino almost make violence look slightly romantic and lighthearted so when I write about the dark side, my violence is dead serious (pardon the pun) and I want to rub the noses of my readers into it so deep that they can't even breathe - and on that note, lol, I will have a nice cuppa tea and jump into the lake after cutting the grass and walking around the bay.

      A good afternoon to you my dear Cat - thank you for the most memorable birthday tribute of all Hubtime and I am still in a glow over it.

      Hugs and love from Colin and T and G at lake erie time 2:18pm after a thunderstorm last night it has dried up with the sun and it is quite warm again

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      Oh Colin dear, I'm so sorry, the sunshine that is LaThing, blinded me from seeing you up there... and look it, you made a funny and killed a see, all while I was right here but missed it :-(

      I'm waiting for my Colin inspiration today... any new hubs in the making?

      Good afternoon hugs from your New York Cat.... I will see you later :D

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      LaThing,

      Ah, I had a moment of inspiration... the moment has passed. My next inspiration will probably come from burnt pork chops... or my love for you... ya never know :D

      Thanks nice lady!

      Cat

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      LOL LOL .... ROFL..... I had fun reading all the comments! I would have been .... errr .... honored (?!) if you had really written it for me *_* BUT we all know where it's going ;)

      Take care, you New Yorker you!! :)

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      epigramman 4 years ago

      Actually we had an ecological disaster here Cat at lake erie.

      You see I was thinking about you today getting all sweaty cleaning out that garage in your short shorts and I got so Bon Jovi hot (because he was darn cute back in the day) that I had to jump into the lake and my body temperature turned it into the dead sea and now it's a parking lot, lol . ooh Catttttttttttttt, lol.

      I pity the poor lake erie perch but I did it for love.

      p.s. - off now to watch an online documentary about Nico - what a voice - listen to her sing the End by the Doors on You Tube - or Femme Fatale - I'll be your mirror - All tomorrrow's parties

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      Oh Colin, how sweet... my goodness; I'm conflicted between laughing or crying :D... Did you get a picture of you in the Bon Jovi wig and leather pants... that would make a wonderful addition to a hub :-)

      Yes, Colin, you were right... I'm a goofball, but I'm a die-hard romantic too! If only we could make our poetry come to life, then we'd be on to something! I could easily say the same about you my dearest friend. You are a very special man and I am grateful for you!

      Oh it was a warm day wasn't it... I picked a bad day to clean the garage :D Oh, Lake Erie must've been cold, are you nuts! You're going to get yourself sick and we certainly don't need that!

      I know, I feel terrible to, let's just keep them in our hearts and minds.

      Big hugs Col, you're the best!

      Cat

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      epigramman 4 years ago

      Oh my dear Cat, I knew it , you're an incurable romantic and when I read this I put on my Bon Jovi wig and my tight leather pants. The only problem now is I can't get out of my pants, lol lol.

      You definitely made my fly with these words and as I always say in terms of poe-tree -if you write from your heart the mind will always follow and you have done both here on the highest artistic level because there are few people in this lifetime I've met with a heart as pure and open as yours.

      Amen. Oh yes I love my three cats.

      lake erie time ontario canada 1:03am listening to one of the greatest jazz players of all time Eric Dolphy and I walked around all day just in shorts and no shirt and I even went into the water for the first time for a swim since last October and right now we have thunderstorms but I managed to see the beautiful half moon over the lake earlier in the evening.

      I am so sorry though for those poor people in Oklahoma City

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      vandynegl,

      Ha ha ha... yeah, well I can turn this love fest over Cat-style awfully quickly :D Yes, I'm usually the one that would be saying "Distance makes the heart grow fonder, now go dear" :D Ya hear me? Thanks girl!

      Cat

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      vandynegl 4 years ago from Ohio Valley

      I love sappy poems! It's funny cause even though distance can be tough on a couple, sometimes we NEED that distance, ya hear me? Just sayin. :). Great poem though!!!!

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      LaThing,

      Thank you so much girlfriend, I’m honored. Well, I was hoping not to expose myself, but since you asked it is for you! Did you not noticed this came shortly after I began following you :D

      Thanks for stopping and your lovely compliments! …don’t be scared ;-)

      Cat

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      Ed,

      Your back…. I thought I had missed you! Phew :D

      Morning Ed… I will be your way for some inspiration on a rainy day ;-)

      Cat

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Awww, what a beautiful poem! You did a great job, my dear friend! Need I ask who it is for!! No, no I am not asking.... Don't say anything, LOL LOL

      really enjoyed it and the comments too!

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      ahorseback 4 years ago

      Hello Cat in new york ......toot!

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      soniao5,

      How nice of you to say, thank you! Love; ‘the cure to all troubles and the answer to all questions’… that’s beautiful, thanks! Thank you for stopping by and sharing!

      Cat

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      agapsikap,

      Thank you girly! I’m so glad you enjoyed it!

      Cat

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      Mhatter99,

      Thank you, that was beautifully sweet, I’m honored!

      Cat

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      sonia05 4 years ago from india

      I must say that your poem has moved me. It is beautiful and romantic.... I believe that love is the cure of all troubles and love is the answer to all questions.

      I am certainly sharing this with my husband.

      excellent read n voted up too!

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      agapsikap 4 years ago from Philippines

      Beautiful poem and those lovely words create a romantic feeling. ;)

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      Martin Kloess 4 years ago from San Francisco

      We have touched. Let's dance again. Wonderful words. thank you

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      vocalcoach,

      Oh my goodness, you’re going to make me cry… and I’m the one the wrote the poem :-)

      This is true…I write my little poems and most of them I keep to myself because I just enjoy it, but this one… one wrote itself. Honestly, I just put my fingers on the keyboard and started hitting buttons and next thing you know… it was over. You are a very perceptive woman, I think that is great… I like to think of myself as one as well, but sometimes seeing ourselves is the hardest person to see.

      Your words are so gracious and beautiful, you have touched me so much, thank you, thank you, a thousand times, thank you! I am so deeply honored and I shall be your way to discover the gems that I know exist over there :-)

      Cat

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      truthfornow,

      Thank you, I really appreciate it! Only real love can…

      Thanks again for stopping and I’m glad you enjoyed it!

      Cat

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      Audrey Hunt 4 years ago from Nashville Tn.

      In order for the poet to write in such a way that the very heart itself can feel such deep emotion, the poet must be filled with these same emotions.

      You have proven with this beautiful piece, how deeply you love and how beautiful you are.

      I'm pinning this to my favorite poetry and sharing all over the place. I can hardly wait for your next "work of art." - You have so much inside of you that craves to be released. Let it go. Keep sparkling and shining!

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      truthfornow 4 years ago from New Orleans, LA

      I love this one. Love overcoming all the odds.

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      Leslie,

      Oh, why is it that whenever you're around I have a sudden urge to either bawl my eyes out or laugh hysterically? :D I have Leslie-induced Bipolar Disorder LIBD (Hey, if we added a couple of vowels in there I can think of a funny word :D

      Seriously though... thank you, your praise means so much to me because I just think you are a goddess with a pen! You're the best girl and I always type with one hand so I can keep my fingers crossed on the other :D

      hugs to you!

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      Karen Silverman 4 years ago

      oh, my dear friend - love is always more difficult when separated by miles! I know this first hand! Your words are nothing short of inspiring and uplifting - which is exactly how i feel after reading them! Thank you for this jewel - your talent is only surpassed by your sparkling personality!

      voting/sharing on

      hugs Cat...