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A New Man In The Making From A Prayer

Updated on January 2, 2016

A Short Story

She wonder what he would look and be like when God would finish molding him, but he had no thought that he would go through the refiners fire.Oh he never paid it no attention at all.

Well you see God had asked him to give it all up for the sake of his own life and the love ones in his life, but he thought it was too much to let go. Late nights out with the buddies, strong drink until he didn’t know what he was saying at times, strip bars, or porn flicks, chasing women of any age just to get a kick. He lost the respect for the woman of his life.

She felt the unfaithfulness. But kept her peace and kindness toward the man she said she loved.

One day she was asked “How do you do it? You know he is cheating on you!

The wife said “I pray”

It is a great trail for the both of us and an addiction for him.

He’s even gone back to school; he said he needs more schooling. He’s just stilling more time to keep from living in reality. That’s another lie he is telling me and himself.

But I let that go as well.

Doesn’t that worry you? She was asked.

Sometimes it do but, “I pray”

Even though it is hell to be here it is also hell to be who he is. So “I pray”

The day will come that we both will know why we stayed and why I never strayed.

He walked into the house one morning after an all nighter,

The house was silent but a different feeling.

He could hear a whispering voice so he proceeded to follow the sound. He got to the door and stood there listening.

Has he stood there he began to cry, and step away from the door.

The husband walked back out the house.

He said “Lord I’m man enough to say I’m sorry. I never knew I was hurting your child. Please forgive me is my plea.”

God ask him “why are you leaving?”

The husband said “Lord if you give me another chance to make it all up to your child. I will go to that old fishing place where she and I first meet and empty myself at that spot. I want you to wash me clean oh Lord.

When I enter my home again I will be a new man.

He got to that place on the lake and he walked over and kneeled down at the water edge and began to pray:

“Heavenly Father I have sinned against the two people that love me the most.

I make no excuses for my wrongs, my wrongs have no explains. I’ve felt your left hand and have seen your right hand as a shadow of covering and never acknowledge she was praying for me.

Touch my tongue with the coals from your alter,

Purify my mind and heart.

He arose and walked out in the water ankle deep

“Wash and anoint my feet so that I may walk with you.”

He walked out knee deep.

“Wash and anoint my knees that I may be humble and bow before you.

He went out waist deep.

“Purge me Father from all my uncleanness that I may be acceptable unto you.

He proceeded to the chest

“Make my heart to know your ways for your ways are higher than my ways”

He proceeded to the neck

“Make your word a shield and buckler to my neck and place your yoke of freedom upon me”

He went down into the water

The water edge
The water edge


“Unto you Father I commit my ways and my life. Let not thy wrath be upon me, that I may live”

Minutes pass it seem the end. Had God not forgave and took his life?

The water was still as though he had never entered.

Had hell swallowed him up?

Was he still seeing the left hand if God?

Was someone still praying for him?

There was a current in the water like a black hole.

Was he gone?

A cloud, than the sun broke through and the hole released him to the top.

He came up shining like the sun praising God.

“Father thanks for being my judge on this day. I have life and peace today.

When your right and left hands come together I know it is unto salvation.”

He returned home and opened that door he had stood by earlier and there she was waiting for the new man.

“He said forgive me, I love you, and thanks for praying for me. God has made me a new man”.

She took his hands and looked into his eyes and said “I know I was there in the presence of my father when you ask him to purge you from your uncleanness

God has turned my tears of sorrow into joy like morning dew

Because I prayed I have a new man.(c) Sharon Smith3/23/2012


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  • SwiftlyClean profile image

    SwiftlyClean 2 years ago from Texas

    Thanks so Much.

  • Anjili profile image

    Anjili 6 years ago from planet earth, a humanoid

    Hi SwiftlyClean,

    Thank you for having such insight that I have only found in women, especially mothers. The perseverance, the hope, the patience of waiting in an otherwise hopeless situation.

    I lost my mum on valentines day of 2012. It took me time to realize that she persistently stood in the gap for me when she was still alive until deliverance came. Then and only then, did she narrate to me how she waited upon the lord on my behalf.

    I used to live in a drunken stupor most of my life which was made worse by a company of siblings who were also sold out to drink.

    But, one day, my eyes just popped open and I saw how my entire family, excluding prayerful mum, was steeped into strong drink and working for the breweries month after month.

    This seriously stirred up my wrath and anger, making me vow never to touch alcohol again, at least to have a sober soul in our homestead. I shortly thereafter gave my life to the lord, got married, built a house and raised a family.

    Thank you lord for always having someone to stand in the gap when we least expect it.

    A very good share indeed considering the things we have to go through for loved ones. Voted up and sharing

  • Dee aka Nonna profile image

    Dee aka Nonna 6 years ago

    This is beautiful and awesome and wonderful and so full of grace. I know this will touch the hearts of many people. I know someone reading this will ask for the strength to be able to pray. Someone reading this will feel stronger just reading. Bravo to you. Voted up, useful, awesome and beautiful. And very, very inspiring.