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A Plea of the Hill touched my heart!

Updated on July 24, 2017

Standing on the top of a hill

I take bird's eye view of the town,

The sight is so lovely , can’t express in words,

I wouldn’t like to hurry and get down.


The roads, the bridges and the rivers,

The huge trees, buildings and all,

Look as beautiful as a picture

I see them all ever so small.


Vehicles are plying on the road,

Moving straight, left and right,

They look smaller and smaller as they move,

And finally they go out of sight.


People on the street look so busy,

I see children on the ground as they play,

No sound from the town I can hear,

I am high up and far away.


The sun is about to set

I am slowly getting down,

To be with my family and friends,

who are there in the town


The hill stands there in despair,

A kind of helpless look I can see

As if telling me ‘I shall miss you my friend,

Please come soon and be with me’.


I turn back, stop, gaze at the hill,

Yes, I must go up there again,

Spend a good deal of time there as often as I can

be it in the sunlight or in the rain.




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      vianasya 5 years ago from Indonesia

      Hello Kamalesh050. Nice share! I like to read it so much. Specially this part :

      The hill stands there in despair,

      A kind of helpless look I can see

      Telling me ‘I am missing you so much,

      Please come soon and be with me’.

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      Kamalesh050 5 years ago from Sahaganj, Dist. Hooghly, West Bengal, India

      Hello Vianasya, So very kind of you to read and comment. Thank you very much my Friend.

      Best Wishes, Take care.

      Kamalesh

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      Amanda 5 years ago from Texas

      so sweet... i like that you give human qualities to the hill. i suppose all life forms need a companion.

      voted up and beautiful.

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      Joyce Haragsim 5 years ago from Southern Nevada

      This is a wonderful poem. voted you up and beautiful

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      Rosemary Sadler 5 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

      Even though we enjoy evryday living now and then we need to climb that hill and separate ourselves from it all.

      To soak up the beauty and replenish our souls with peace. Then we can rejoin the world and enjoy what is around us once again.

      I loved this poem and love the way you humanised the hill.

      Voted up

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      Kamalesh050 5 years ago from Sahaganj, Dist. Hooghly, West Bengal, India

      @Ama Tainted - Very kind of you my friend for the comment. Thank you so much. I am glad that you have liked the poem.

      Best Wishes. Take care.

      Kamalesh

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      Kamalesh050 5 years ago from Sahaganj, Dist. Hooghly, West Bengal, India

      @Ama Tainted - Very kind of you my friend for the comment. Thank you so much. I am glad that you have liked the poem.

      Best Wishes. Take care.

      Kamalesh

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      Kamalesh050 5 years ago from Sahaganj, Dist. Hooghly, West Bengal, India

      @ Writer20, So nice to hear from you, as always. Many thanks for your continued support my friend. Its always so nice to see you.

      Hope you are all well. Have a good day.

      Best Wishes,

      Kamalesh

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      Kamalesh050 5 years ago from Sahaganj, Dist. Hooghly, West Bengal, India

      @Rosemay50 - How beautifully you have commented my friend. What you said about the poem is exactly the kind of feelings I had while writing. Yes I imagined the hill as a living being having all the feelings and sentiments that we have. I am glad to know that you have liked the poem.

      Trust you are all well my dear. May God Bless you.

      Best Wishes,

      Kamalesh

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      Richard Ricky Hale 5 years ago from West Virginia

      up, awesome, and beautiful. Wow!!!!! This was written with deep meaning and you did a great job:) I loved it!! Keep it up Kamalash, you keep at it.

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      Kamalesh050 5 years ago from Sahaganj, Dist. Hooghly, West Bengal, India

      Thelyricwriter - Thanks my dear for your comment, So very kind of you. I feel great to know that you have liked the poem. Thank you for your continued support and all the encouragement.

      Take care.

      Best Wishes,

      Kamalesh

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      Sayan 2 years ago

      Excellent poem. Great work Kamalesh !

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      Kamalesh050 2 years ago from Sahaganj, Dist. Hooghly, West Bengal, India

      Thank you Sayan. Delighted to know that you have liked this poem.

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