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Example of a Sad Poem : Lost Friendship

Updated on November 3, 2013
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Since the day that I met you

My heart was filled with blithe

You gave colors to my world

Because of smiles you brought


You make me laugh when I’m sad,

After a moment, I’m already glad.

You’re a good friend! So, told myself-

“I will treasure till the end.”


One day I saw you crying.

They said because of my wrong doing.

I told you to smile but you did not,

Because of me, anger filled your heart


I was hurt, don’t you know?

Our friendship broke, why is it so?

I tried to ask you, you turned your back

I said sorry but you answered- “That’s not enough!”


I decided to let go

With our friendship that didn’t ever flows.

And how hard I wish today,

That you’ll forgive me someday


This poem is all about : A friend who had hurt his beloved friend but when his friend ask forgiveness, he was rejected and told that it will never works anymore. The painful truth will set him free.

Do you lost a friend because you have done something wrong (vice versa)

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      Carolee Samuda 3 years ago from Jamaica

      Hi Ken. Good title but not very strong keywords. The poem is a sad poem because you are saying goodbye to a friend so we change the title to "Sad Poem: Lost Friendship".

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      Kenneth C Agudo 3 years ago from Tiwi, Philippines

      Wow, now I am really impress, I will be updating you the progress in terms of topic, I would love to share with you my experience and interview me about your tutorial to me and you can help more more newbie's like me =) keep strong and kind cardisa

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      sheilamyers 3 years ago

      Another beautiful poem although it's a sad one. It always hurts to loose a friend simply because they won't forgive.

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      Kenneth C Agudo 3 years ago from Tiwi, Philippines

      yes, it is very true, I am glad that you love the poem =)

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