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A Poem With No Home

Updated on April 20, 2017
by: lukeok
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My #20 for National Poetry Month


clutch of words

strung on gray silk

between your mouth

my ear


distance nubs thread

pushing small poems

off with the breath of consonants.


trailing in dirt.



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      whonunuwho 5 weeks ago from United States

      I liked the illustration of a wandering feather with no home. Nice words written upon the page, my friend. Blessings. whonu

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      Jamie Lee Hamann 5 weeks ago from Reno NV

      "trailing in dirt" Wow...this makes me ponder breaks in communication in my own relationships. Sometimes one misplaced word and your world will tilt. Jamie

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      manatita44 4 weeks ago from london

      Vivid, yet deep. Excellent work!!

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      Ksenija 4 weeks ago from Novo mesto, Slovenia

      Beautiful ...

      Between your mouth, my ear - so common nowadays.

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      Louise Powles 4 weeks ago from Norfolk, England

      That's another beautiful poem. The image of the floating feather is lovely.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 4 weeks ago from Southern Illinois

      Words swirling around in the ear, just like a floating feather. Beautiful!

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      Audrey Howitt 4 weeks ago from California

      Thank you Ruby!!

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      Bill Holland 4 weeks ago from Olympia, WA

      Here's a compliment I've never given you...oftentimes, after I read one of your poems, the words, or a phrase, will stay with me throughout the day, and I'll still be kicking it around into the evening.

      Now that is impact!

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      Rajan Singh Jolly 4 weeks ago from From Mumbai, presently in Jalandhar,INDIA.

      Exquisite & powerful.

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      Paula 4 weeks ago from Beautiful Upstate New York

      Audrey.....How wonderful that you are offering a Poetic gift each day during National Poetry Month. You seem to out-do yourself with each lovely submission! I enjoy them all. Paula

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      Audrey Hunt 4 weeks ago from Nashville Tn.

      Your poetry is "music to my ears." Thank you Audrey.

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      Audrey Howitt 4 weeks ago from California

      I love lines like that Bill--when those come, I think you just have to treasure them! Thank you for your kind words!

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      MizBejabbers 4 weeks ago

      "Strung on gray silk...trailing in dirt" Imagery reminds me of "if you can't say something nice, don't say anything at all. Very nice. poem.

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      Audrey Hunt 4 weeks ago from Nashville Tn.

      Imaginative and thought-provoking. Marvelous!

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      Tim Mitchell 4 weeks ago from Escondido, CA

      Beautiful poem Audrey!

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      FlourishAnyway 4 weeks ago from USA

      The difference between what says (or meant to) and what is heart can be so great, and communication can fragment or bind fragile relationships.

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      mckbirdbks 4 weeks ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

      Hi Audrey - This rings like a bell.

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      Audrey Howitt 4 weeks ago from California

      Thank you whonu! So very true Jamie--I have tried to stuff a word back in my moth on many occasions--it never ends well--Thank you Manatita!

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      Audrey Howitt 4 weeks ago from California

      Thank you MzBJ!

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      Audrey Howitt 4 weeks ago from California

      Thank you Louise!

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      Audrey Howitt 3 weeks ago from California

      Thank you Tim!

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 3 weeks ago from Riga, Latvia

      Nicely penned. You have these poems down to perfection and I enjoy them all.

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      Audrey Howitt 3 weeks ago from California

      Thank you Rasma! Not sure that I have anything really down-- writing feels a bit like stealing from thin air though

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      Audrey Howitt 3 weeks ago from California

      Hey Mike--Thank you!

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      Audrey Howitt 3 weeks ago from California

      I agree Flourish! And thank you!

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