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A Precipice For Change

Updated on June 10, 2013
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She's standing on the edge, staring out

A precipice of what could be either bad or good

Yet there seems to be no other route

And if there were another way she would

Still, she can't jump without a parachute

Especially when there's no safety net below

Of this she's absolutely resolute

Because before the good, the storm will surely blow

If only she could be so wise

Freedom would soar above it all with wings

She would be strong enough to fly

And it would not matter much, these things

© 2013 Shannon

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      Cat 3 years ago from New York

      Shan, you are just full of beautiful gems today, yes? This is fantastic; I love it... you are my hero! :D

      It's like you're in my head today :-)

      Love ya!

      Cat

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      Nellieanna Hay 3 years ago from TEXAS

      Voted Up, Awesome. Beautiful and Interesting, but where's the voting button for Unnerving?

      Hi - Cat !- We posted absolutely simultaneously!

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      Cat 3 years ago from New York

      You're a sneaky little lady :D

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      Shannon 3 years ago from Texas

      Wow - trying to keep up with the both of you!

      Cat, we've a little too much in common. Plus, we're twins, remember? It's easy to get in your head :D Love ya, too!

      Nellieanna, unnerving is the word!

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      Jennifer 3 years ago from New Jersey

      If there was another way.....she would.....

      My favorite line! I also like the end is a bit open ended. Great read for sure!

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      Shannon 3 years ago from Texas

      Yes, open ended is hopeful, at least. Thanks for reading, Theater girl, and for letting me know which part you liked best. :)

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

      I like this, interesting thoughts of change.....

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      Cat 3 years ago from New York

      Shan,

      'Course I remember... how could I forget!? Just wanted to say hi and love ya! Hope all is well and yes, I treated myself to reading it again as long as I was here :D

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and awesome. This was just wonderful and great pics.

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      Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales

      Another brilliant gem shanmarie.

      Voted up.

      Enjoy your day .

      Eddy.

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      Shannon 3 years ago from Texas

      Thank you, Ruby. Good to see you!

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      Shannon 3 years ago from Texas

      Hi, Cat. Love ya, too. Aw, thanks for reading twice!

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      Shannon 3 years ago from Texas

      Thank you, Gypsy! Glad you liked the pictures. Kind of what a precipice even for change might be like, especially if one is free falling toward whatever comes.

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      Shannon 3 years ago from Texas

      Thanks, Eddy! So glad you think so. You have a great day as well!

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      Poetic Fool 3 years ago

      Hi, Shanmarie. I enjoy your poems because they make me think. I love that. So, to jump or not jump? The point of decision, uncertainty, risk. It makes these moments so difficult. What does the future hold? What if? This intriguing piece reminds me of one of my own ... except yours is better, of course! Thanks for sharing it.

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      Shannon 3 years ago from Texas

      Thanks, Poetic Fool! I appreciate your comment very much. That's quite a compliment to make you think, and you are very right about the uncertainty. May I ask which poem of yours it reminds you of? I'd like to read it. :)

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      Poetic Fool 3 years ago

      Shanmarie, it reminds me thematically not so much in style or form. It's the whole big life-changing decision that needs to be made thing. It's called "Standing on a Ledge".

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      Shannon 3 years ago from Texas

      Is it on HubPages? I'll go look for it. The titles are similar...well...the thoughts from the titles anyway. I can see how it will relate.

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      Poetic Fool 3 years ago

      Yes, it's on HubPages.

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      Shannon 3 years ago from Texas

      Found it! Commented too. :) Kind of cuts to the heart, though, so no lengthy comment.

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      Lurana Brown 3 years ago from Chicagoland, Illinois

      I can feel the wind in my hair and the pull of gravity.

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      Shannon 3 years ago from Texas

      Yikes, Lurana! I hope you're soaring with wings and not free falling without a parachute!

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      Lurana Brown 3 years ago from Chicagoland, Illinois

      In a good way, because your writing is so vivid!! :-) The winds of change, they are a-blowin'...

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      Shannon 3 years ago from Texas

      Aw. . .that they are!

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      DREAM ON 3 years ago

      Enjoy your work.Very deep.I have to read it a couple of times.So many different meanings.

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      Shannon 3 years ago from Texas

      Thanks so much, DREAM ON. Yes, I suppose this could have different meanings.

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      Bill Holland 2 years ago from Olympia, WA

      I think we all look for the courage to step off and test our wings. Sadly, some people never do....beautiful thoughts here.

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      Shannon 2 years ago from Texas

      It's quite a feeling to test those wings, billybuc.

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