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A Priceless Gift

Updated on March 3, 2011

Oh morning star,
you shine so bright,
lone sentinel,
of dawning light.
Your gentle glow
a beacon to
escort the day
yet born anew.

O morning star,
you gem so rare,
herald of
the morning fair.
a diamond in
the velvet sky,
you beckon dawn
as she draws nigh.

o morning star,
with strength anew,
you greet the day
in grand debut.
a whispered hope
to all below,
a priceless gift
you do bestow.

"Copyright 2011, All Rights Reserved."


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    • tnderhrt23 profile imageAUTHOR


      7 years ago

      Romancer, thank you!

    • ROMANCER OF LIFE profile image


      7 years ago from Honolulu, Hawaii

      In simple terms... "Beautiful!"

    • tnderhrt23 profile imageAUTHOR


      7 years ago

      Thank you, Ruby! You are a sweet gal!

    • always exploring profile image

      Ruby Jean Richert 

      7 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Voted up, up and away, Beautiful

    • tnderhrt23 profile imageAUTHOR


      7 years ago

      Thank you, Fossillady! The morning star is an awesome thing!

    • Fossillady profile image


      7 years ago from Saugatuck Michigan

      Very pretty poem to match the pretty pictures!

    • tnderhrt23 profile imageAUTHOR


      7 years ago

      b. Malin, I am so glad! Thank you for your read and lovely comment!

    • b. Malin profile image

      b. Malin 

      7 years ago

      Lovely rich Poem, with beautiful pictures, makes my day! Thanks for sharing.

    • tnderhrt23 profile imageAUTHOR


      7 years ago

      Thank you, Carrie, yes I love the photos too!

    • carrie450 profile image


      7 years ago from Winnipeg, Canada

      Beautiful poem tnderhrt23 and I love the photos that go with it.

    • tnderhrt23 profile imageAUTHOR


      7 years ago

      SilentReed, thank you for your comment, and it is my joy, indeed!

      Bijosh, thanks dor the read and comment. I am glad you enjoyed it!

    • Bijosh profile image


      7 years ago from from the cosmic sea, sustaining life and radiating purity.

      A nice poem about the morning star, great work.

    • SilentReed profile image


      7 years ago from Philippines

      This is a lovely tribute to a lovely sentinel. With your pen "a priceless gift you bestow"...on us. Thank you.

    • tnderhrt23 profile imageAUTHOR


      7 years ago

      Thank you, CMCastro! God's gifts are so awesome! And you are one of them!

      Epigramman, you are a priceless gift to me as well!

    • epigramman profile image


      7 years ago

      ......well I must sincerely repeat everything that

      CMCastro just said - and that your writing and friendship is a priceless gift to me ......

    • CMCastro profile image

      Christina M. Castro 

      7 years ago from Baltimore,MD USA

      Tndrhrt, You are a gifted poet. I just think its neat that we both thought of writing about gifts around the same time tonight. Your poem here is truly elegant and the colorful pictures are gorgeous. Have a peaceful night! CM

    • tnderhrt23 profile imageAUTHOR


      7 years ago

      vet, thank you! I so appreciate your comment!

    • vietnamvet68 profile image


      7 years ago from New York State

      the morning star a beautiful sight and a great write

      God Bless

    • tnderhrt23 profile imageAUTHOR


      7 years ago

      Fiddleman, thank you. A morning star is worthy!

      WillStarr, thank you, Kind Sir!

      RHeydrich, thank you, thank you!

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      7 years ago

      Quite good. Simple, yet elegant. I can't wait for more.

    • WillStarr profile image


      7 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona

      You have the gift.

      Well done.

      Up and beautiful!

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      7 years ago



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