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Red Hue in the Storm

Updated on December 30, 2012
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A Poem


Blossoms bloom among nature's disease,

as people hide, panic, and flee.

Earthy torment haunts with furious wind

as humans are hidden from a Hibiscus win.

People are uprooted from their normal routes,

as a native holds tight to it's rustic roots.

It makes no excuse for losing it's leafs,

no apologies as the calmness leaves.

It sees no storm, but feels allured in its senses,

so it holds tight despite gusts so relentless.

The storm blows, then grows in power and might,

but the flower stands unafraid that it might

fall to the horrors of Fall's furious intentions,

as it's suspended on stems, God's basic invention.

This beauty will groove like a dancer's regimen,

as it moves smooth like jazz with a red hue percussion.

It's a passionate romance, a perennial performance.

It stuns the winds, as they take a moment to pause.

And nature showers Hibiscus with a soggy applause.



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      Brian Loewer 5 years ago from Portland, Oregon

      Thanks lily, I appreciate the support.

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      Lillian K. Staats 5 years ago from Wasilla, Alaska

      it's good. Very good. lily

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      Brian Loewer 5 years ago from Portland, Oregon

      Thanks so much Sue!

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      Sueswan 5 years ago

      Beautifully done. I applaud you.

      Voted up and away

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      Brian Loewer 5 years ago from Portland, Oregon

      Express I'm flattered. Haha, well thanks so much, really means a lot. I can't take credit for the photo, but the poem is all mine! I appreciate the read.

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      H C Palting 5 years ago from East Coast

      I just had to let you know that the stories you create with your words are pretty moving and I love the picture on this Hub too. I wish I could offer you a gig/job.

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      Brian Loewer 5 years ago from Portland, Oregon

      Hello Express. Well are you offering me a job? :) I think it would be awesome to write song lyrics, unfortunately I'm not well versed in writing music. Thanks so much for the great comment.

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      H C Palting 5 years ago from East Coast

      Beautiful, you should write song lyrics.

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      Brian Loewer 5 years ago from Portland, Oregon

      Sky- Glad you've enjoyed what you've been reading. I've been trying to write more consistently on here. Thanks for the great encouragement.

      Dr. Outlaw- Thanks, I'm glad to hear I didn't butcher this poem, because I didn't know anything about these flowers till I wrote it. I don't think we have them here in Oregon. I appreciate the compliments.

      Verita- haa, It's all good I knew what you were saying. well I'm glad you thought this one was sweet! and thanks a bunch.

      Rosemay- Thanks so much for your kind comment.

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      Rosemary Sadler 5 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

      The hibiscus sure is beautiful and you have captured it well in your poem.

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      V Qisya 5 years ago

      Your poetry is as sweet as the hibiscus nectar, not the other way round haha. Sorry bout' that, Brian.

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      V Qisya 5 years ago

      The hibiscus nectar is as sweet as your poetry. Flows beautifully. I love it, Brian.

      Simply Awesome! Up and away :D

      Best Wishes, V

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      Drtruthman 5 years ago from Harlingen, Texas

      Really good poem. Of course I am very partial to the Hibiscus living in deep South Texas where they abound and growing up in South FL where they are even more plentiful, I do love the Hibiscus. A great example of the creative beauty of God. Good work. I voted UP, beautiful and interesting.

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      Sky9106 5 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      It's a pleasure reading , when you are on this beautiful personal roll, keep up the great work and stay true to what you believe and to your self. Great work.

      Bless.

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