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A Reflection on Splitting Hairs

Updated on November 16, 2010

What a farce...

I have myself an elegant cigar....

shouldn't be but puffed lightly...

it will make you sick any other way...

It is much better then those lowly cigarettes...

they will kill you, you know...

George Burns smoked this brand...

he lived so very long...

It must be better then that other...


Graffiti to the soul gone wrong...

but this one cut out and hung in a gallery...

Disregard that both use paint and speak of things...

one shouldn't think of...

This one is legit, refined...

Not dangerous, not salient to the mind...

Splitting hairs perhaps to you...

but this excrement is clean...

that smells like poo...

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    • Jaggedfrost profile image
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      Jaggedfrost 6 years ago

      @Alayne I am glad that you and your husband enjoyed. I appreciate the feed back.

      @Twolittlehands I am glad you liked this as well.

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      Alayne Fenasci 6 years ago from Louisiana

      Love this! My husband and I both got a good laugh off of this. Too true.

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      twolittlehands 6 years ago from Utah

      Well said.

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      Jaggedfrost 6 years ago

      lol I had to drop the "h" least some come to the wrong conclusion.

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      b. Malin 6 years ago

      Very good and so true...especially the Pooh one...see a lot of truth there!

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      Jaggedfrost 6 years ago

      lol I thought you might like it even if I was refering to a comment made by someone else.

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      India Arnold 6 years ago from Northern, California

      Nice work here.