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A Return To Innocence

Updated on May 7, 2014

I wake up in a puddle of my own drool, my butt in the air and my knees tucked under my chest. I blink, and then come untraveled with a scream. Only it’s not my scream, it’s little boy's cry.

I’m in my racecar bed, wearing my racecar pajamas. I blink again, my eyes bulging as I focus. My hands are little and sticky.

I swing my feet out in front of me, panting. And then I’m really crying, balling and sniffling like group therapy. I can’t stop. I jump as the door opens and my mom walks in the room. Her eyes are young and wide and she’s beautiful.

“Grayson. It’s okay sweetie. Come here.”

She takes me in her arms. I put my head in her bosom. She smells like honeysuckle, a hint of vanilla, a heady scent that my mind could never produce on its own in a dream. It’s the safest place I’ve ever known.

She cradles me and it’s only then I notice that I’m in my childhood room. I pull away and peer straight into her eyes. Her face is free of all the hurt and pain that life has slung at her—will sling at her. We stare at each other in a still silence for nearly a full minute. Then a smile breaks across her lips.

“I love you Grayson.”

“I love you Mommy.”

She makes pancakes. I sit across from my six year old sister, beside my father who sips coffee. I reach out and touch him. The fact that I’m three years old is now fully hitting me. It’s too real for a dream. Time travel? Maybe, but it’s more still.

“Grayson, what’s the matter, son?”

I shake my head, my eyes awash with tears.

“Dad, it’s me.”

“Well yes son, it is you.”

I stammer and pout. My mind works too fast for the mechanics of speaking. I glance at the wallpaper, the green rotary phone. I know it’s 1979 and I don’t need to see the opened newspaper to confirm that yes, this is the day that my father died, and nearly two years before my sister will drown in Mason Creek.


My mother’s voice is like honey. It is sweet and full and free of the pain that will turn it to rust. It’s years before I will enter my first rehab and something like 26 years before she dies and I slide that needle back into my arm.

It hits me, just as my mother is setting a plate of pancakes on the table. This is what’s next. Even though I’ve shunned God and been too lazy to be an athiest. When I plummeted off a bridge my life looped.

If this is hell, I’ll do it all over again. If it’s heaven I can change the past.

“Grayson, what is it sweetie?”

“I don’t want Dad to go to work.”

Mom gives my father a sweet look. He opens the door and turns around, his voice deep and sturdy.

“Trust me, kid, I don’t want to go either.”

I squirm out of her grasp and scuttle out the door. It’s bright. I’m outside, in the blinding rays of the fresh sunlight. I can hear my father, somewhere. He’s laughing with my mother. I wipe my eyes, my sister waves me over.

They’re waiting for me.


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      Pete Fanning 3 years ago from Virginia

      Thanks for reading Jodah, glad you enjoyed it!

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      John Hansen 3 years ago from Queensland Australia

      What a great story...kind of sad and I didn't want it to end.

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      Pete Fanning 3 years ago from Virginia

      Why thank you Genna!

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      Genna East 3 years ago from Massachusetts, USA

      What a wonderful story...I love the way you write.

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      Pete Fanning 3 years ago from Virginia

      Thanks resspenser, glad you stopped by!

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      Ronnie Sowell 3 years ago from South Carolina

      Loved it! Excellent story.

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      Pete Fanning 3 years ago from Virginia

      Lucky for me this wasn't a memory MsDora!

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      Dora Weithers 3 years ago from The Caribbean

      Innocence is a happy destination. Glad you experienced it. What's nice is that you can revisit the memory as often as you want.