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A Sad Girl's Blues

Updated on July 6, 2011

I walk into a bar and all eyes on me

I walk with swag for all ‘em boys to see

Straight ahead sits the one I came to hear

A juke box and a sad girl blue I endear

Yea that’s right I said a sad girls blue

I grab a beer and I snap my fingers to

I asked “Give me just one reason” why

I shouldn’t march out that door goodbye

No reason he spoke to say don’t go

As I stand and puff on my cig and blow

Your chance you had to hold and keep

Your lips sealed so tight not even a peep

So I tilted my hat to ya and said so long

Baby, you’ll realize where you badly went wrong

You let me walk the cold concrete floor

I left without looking back out the front door

I sing my sad girl blues as I sit and think

You threw it all away with your eye blink

It’s what you wanted a choice that was made

Just know my mental picture of you will fade

No broken heart to mend I cut all ties

No tears left for this sad girl to cry

Another shot into the glass please make it rum

My dear Tracy plucks the guitar string and strum

bellawritter23(copyright) 2011


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      Erica Sanchez 6 years ago from California

      Lol, Thanks sunshine yes good riddance indeed it was!!

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      Nikki Wicked 6 years ago from Louisiana

      good bye and good riddance! one strong girl blues.

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      Erica Sanchez 6 years ago from California

      Sweetie, Thank you a bit very little ;)

      Shy, I love the blues genre in music but not emotionally. But I think my character was kind not looking back and felt hey it was his loss not hers ;) thanks for stopping by.


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      shygirl2 6 years ago

      Sad poem, bella. I've never been too fond of the blues myself. But, the old juke box sure can help one vent when they need to, can't it? : )

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      sweetie1 6 years ago from India

      Very nice poem with lots of dark shade. You are very talented poetess.

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      Erica Sanchez 6 years ago from California

      I really do hope so :)

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      Mentalist acer 6 years ago from A Voice in your Mind!

      A blue's tune on a staff and "bar".;)

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      Erica Sanchez 6 years ago from California

      Awww you are too sweet well who knows maybe one day, right, wishful thinking.... :D


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      Saksham Malik 6 years ago from Chandigarh, India

      Would love to hear it composed one day , great work ! Just great !

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      Erica Sanchez 6 years ago from California

      Possible It may be but what are the odds of getting recognized ????

      Hyph, Aww thanks a mill. I tried :D


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      Brenda Barnes 6 years ago from America-Broken But Still Beautiful

      Sad girls sing the blues so well. And when they move on it is with a strut that says, "You are going to miss this." You wrote it well Bella, very well.

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      Cornelius Brutus 6 years ago

      If ` A sad girl`s blues`. ws written by you then youre already a song writer, just no one recognise your talent.

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      Erica Sanchez 6 years ago from California

      No I dont I wish I did lol :)

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      Cornelius Brutus 6 years ago

      you write music huh?


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