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A Self-Proclaimed Witch

Updated on January 29, 2017

A Self Proclaimed Witch


Her eyes would twitch,

she was a self proclaimed witch,

fear and desperation,

it was what she was facing,

her pulse was racing,

and she could feel her blood

pounding in her temples,

she was starting to perspire,

her soul was hot,

and her mind was on fire,

she would hear a groan,

and death came in with a low moan,

she tried to look away,

but he took the point of her chin

in his hand and brought her eye to eye,

her emotions were thin,

and she did everything, but cry,

she pulled at her dress,

her hair was a mess,

soaked through with sweat,

and it was sticking to her forehead,

moments later, her life had ended,

violently, and she was completely dead.


© 2011 Frank Atanacio


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      Frank Atanacio 3 years ago from Shelton

      LOL i'll say she had :)

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      Anna Haven 3 years ago from Scotland

      She clearly had a very bad day! You described her very clearly.

      I seen the link to this on the last hub I read, and had to peek. Good title. :)

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      Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

      thank you sweetie!!!!

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      lovedoctor926 4 years ago

      I voted up on this hub.. Good work.

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      Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

      Thanks Marlene :)

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      lovedoctor926 4 years ago

      A vivid description. good imagery! voted up!

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      Frank Atanacio 5 years ago from Shelton

      thanks so much Ryan and tnderhrt23 for reading my little witch tale

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      Ryan Christopher Beitler 7 years ago from Peachtree, PA

      Very nice piece. Killed him and then commited suicide obviously me guess at the end. Overall good read! Im a big poetry writer . The detail in this poem is my favorite and honestly..... I like it as is. Simple wording but very vivid pictures displayed. Check me out and Ill follow you also. ")

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      tnderhrt23 7 years ago

      This is a haunting write that took me to Salem...chilling!