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A Side Effect Of Being Totally Intoxicated!

Updated on April 6, 2010



I-mbibing beyond all hopes to absorb,

N-eeding to escape life's cups of sorrow,

T-ottering to my vehicle, and leaving,

O-bsessed with speeding in the summer air,

X  's- on a white board spell out railroad,

I-gnore the warning bells, and gate's descending,

C-ataclysmic wrench of steel on metal grinding,

A-larm reaches my brain cells far too late,

T-rapped my car it slowly flattens with me,

E-nveloped into steel and flesh, I scream,

D-eath claims me long before I'm ripped to shreds.

A Wild turkey can lose it's head as quickly
Black Velvet is the face of death that greets you
Old grandad is what you will not become,
Absolut vodka could well lead to your absolution
a six pack might just pack you six feet under
beyond the realms of life forevermore.
Intoxication brings a chance of passing
into a stupor that leads you to pass
from a night of raising hell to a hell raised entrance
drink wisely, booze can stupify the best.       ©-MFB III.


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    • Debarshi Dutta profile image

      Debarshi Dutta 7 years ago from Calcutta

      They say the best things in life are for free and after reading your poems I do believe what they say!

    • thevoice profile image

      thevoice 7 years ago from carthage ill

      great hub truth thanks

    • DREAM ON profile image

      DREAM ON 7 years ago

      So true.The dangers of drinking to much.I recently did a hub on alcoholism.I gave it to my brother who I care for very much.It did not go over well.Disasterous by everyone including the family.I did it to wake him up.No chance I guess>

    • Micky Dee profile image

      Micky Dee 7 years ago

      Very, very nice!