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A Sinner Angel's Retribution (poetry)

Updated on January 24, 2013
ANd i try so Hard :S
ANd i try so Hard :S

Please while reading listen to Haunted by Disturbed, it is a very beautiful (metal :D) song which i was listening to while writing this treacherous poem

A sinner’s retribution

And the broken angel cried to the shadow cast by his body, begged for love’s thorn to be removed

Pinned on the cellar’s wall, it looked into Valentine’s eye and watched her heart being moved

“Yes take away the dire pain that nails me endlessly to the ground

Extract that gloominess covering my body and soul all around”

Plunge it deep down in the soil, purify my soul and let it burn

A sentimental heart easily breaks when it turns fragile like a fern

Sentiments, Love? All are deadly sins made for man contaminating his pure

Cut through the scared veins with your scalpel remove this abomination for sure

Purify my thoughts with holly water let it wash away all my disgracing sins

Love is dirty, seducing darkness like a vampire’s seductive endorphins

It makes us fragile and weak

It makes us materialist, a freak

And who am I to speak?

Drive a stake through my heart

And drive me into sunlight

A treacherous angel bound by seducing demonic darkness

Rebelled for nothing but love’s empty useless promises

Hell’s tongues of flames will rip through my flesh

And due to my sins behemoth demons will feed fresh

His razor blades cut through the wrists, making the flesh beneath it smile

The darkness fades as the blood floods smothering the clean floor tiles

Dig down your heart in this soil
Feed the flames so the serpents uncoil

Dig down your heart Dig it down next to me” deathstars , arclight adapted

And until the end of time it will be


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    • Moms-Secret profile image


      5 years ago from Central Florida

      Dark story. Self condemnation. Sad but common. Some stories are worth the torment and some people can learn to skip the torment and live in appreciation of their past heartbreaks. Although that last part is hard.

      Why not just include the you tube video for the song right on this hub? That would be awesome. I do it almost all the time.

    • onetouchnewlife profile image

      Albert Kivak 

      5 years ago from Cemetary

      How do you get so much followers and I get none?

    • Nikkij504gurl profile image

      Nikki Wicked 

      8 years ago from Louisiana

      basically how i feel right now. id give anything for loves empty useless promises.

    • Uriel profile imageAUTHOR


      9 years ago from Lebanon

      tantrum thank you for the support and the lovely comments :D

      Ultramagnus thanks for the support i hope my articles fit the standards as well :)

    • UltraMagnus profile image


      9 years ago from Las Vegas, Nevada

      this is a really great poetry. I know that im good at writing articles but writing in the form of poetry oh man its too overwhelming for me.

    • Uriel profile imageAUTHOR


      9 years ago from Lebanon



    • Cris A profile image

      Cris A 

      9 years ago from Manila, Philippines

      treacherous indeed! it's a marvel - like the poet :D

    • Uriel profile imageAUTHOR


      9 years ago from Lebanon

      I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s tantrum Thank you for commenting and stopping by. It is an honor :D

    • tantrum profile image


      9 years ago from Tropic of Capricorn

      DARK!!! I loved it !

    • I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s profile image


      9 years ago

      You are an amazing poet, Uriel! Loved it! :D

    • Uriel profile imageAUTHOR


      9 years ago from Lebanon

      Jayb23 thank you for your comments and support. Always a pleasure "D

    • jayb23 profile image


      9 years ago from India

      Simply Awesome Uriel. I hav bookmarked this poem. Keep up the good work.


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