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A Soldiers Gave Me Love Advice

Updated on April 2, 2012

Come My friend

I will tell you of my life greatest battle

The battle of love

Too many voice in my head
Trying to connect with my thought

Too many sad faces
Worst than Nation falling apart

Tears running down my eyes.
Feels like rain drops

My life is a hurricane
Am every breaking News that hurts

Am David
My life is in God's hands

Sailing to the unknown
My only fear was loosing the one I love

There is a war going on
No one is willing to quit

I will rather die than know defeat
These are warriors roars

No matter how hard it feels
A warrior never says quit

Stand tall my friend
Shore might be just one last push.

She still can be yours.

What does great Soldiers do..

They Fight! and they never say Quit!

My friend

Follow suit.

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      Callum 6 years ago from Edinburgh, Scotland, UK (At Home With My Wonderful Partner)

      Hi Capedium love this poem :)

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      Ov Overo 6 years ago from Oklahoma

      No. Thank you so much.. For finding time to read and for your encouraging remarks

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      Mary Hyatt 6 years ago from Florida

      I loved the photo you chose to begin this Hub. I enjoyed the read. Thanks so much.

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      Sueswan 6 years ago

      Hi Capedium

      I agree with you that without love nothing truly makes sense.

      Take care my friend. :-)

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      Ov Overo 6 years ago from Oklahoma

      That's so true..

      Love is a beautiful thing

      Sometimes, it hurts so much. True..

      But there are sweet moment we will give up anything to have over and over again.. That's the beauty of love..

      It gives you a thousand reason to live..

      A million reason not to cry.

      A billion reason to be happy.

      No one should have to give up on love.

      Without love not truly makes sense

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      Sueswan 6 years ago

      Hi Capedium,

      You have written a beautiful, wise and heartfelt poem.

      "Stand tall my friend

      Shore might be just one last push."

      These words tell us that we should never give up on love.

      Voted up and away!

      Have a beautiful day. :-)

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      Ov Overo 6 years ago from Oklahoma

      Well spoken.. I wish guys all the beauties in the world.

      And thanks for finding time to read

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      Ov Overo 6 years ago from Oklahoma

      Thank you very much..

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      Ov Overo 6 years ago from Oklahoma

      @ Deborah Brooks.. Am am always thrilled and humble to see you read my hub.. I used to have a friend in the Army.. When, he was around, he always linked everything with war, he was a really nice guy.. I thought about him yesterday, and I decide to put sweet words on paper. Or should I say computer.

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      KatrineDalMonte 6 years ago

      This is very husband has an army background. Love built on strong foundations can not be defeated by any distance. :-)

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 6 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      Great poem and sentiments.

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 6 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      You are so right.. the strongest woman I know of is my mom.. My dad was in the army in fact he retired army He was in Korea on Pork chop Hill when I was a baby and then two tours of Vietnam.. he was on the front lines.and Mom stood by my dad and took care of the home front. she was an awesome Army wife.

      Great hub and great poem



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