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A Song, A Gift, A Fallen Soul

Updated on December 31, 2012
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Close To Your Heart:

Speak to me;
Hold me close to your heart.
Let me fly around,
But don't let me go!

Whisper to me;
Keep me close to your heart....
Show me the world,
But don't let me fly away.

Hold me tight;
Keep me warm in your arms.
Cover me with love,
But don't let your feelings show!

Show me love as love should be.
Show me you care, as has never been seen before.
Show me passion from far away,
Show me life as you once adored.....

Fallen Soul:

Keep me close,
Don't let the whispers take you away.
Cover me with your love,
And let me hear what you have to say!

Promise me,
Hold me close to your heart!
And I will Show you
How my soul shares it's love!

Love is ..... from deep within my heart,
A touch......that makes your passion glow,
A feeling ..... forever strong,
Warm and tender ..... begging for more!

Hold me now,
Hold me deep in your heart
And never...... ever let me go!

___________oooo_________________

© 2012 LaThing

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      Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

      wow Lathing your lyrics are strong.. it's like watching a soul being lifted by the wind if he or she is not being held onto.. so powerfully written ...Hey just want to wish you and your family a Happy New Years!!!

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Good morning, Frank, wonderful to see you here on the last day of the year, LOL ! Thanks for such an insightful comment...... Struggle of the soul, interesting!

      Hope your new year is full of happiness, and prosperity..... Enjoy your parties! :))

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      Bill Holland 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

      You really are a very good poet, Lizzie! This is beautiful work with exquisite images. Thank you for starting my day off with a touch of beauty, and Happy New Year to you.

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Thank you, Billy, for the wonderful comment. I am touched :)

      Wish you and Bev a safe and joyous New years. Take care.....

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      Thomas Silvia 4 years ago from Massachusetts

      A very beautiful and awesome poem which made it a very enjoyable read. Well done !

      Vote up and more !!!

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hi there, Kashmir! Thanks for reading and enjoying my poem. Appreciate your votes and everything..... Have a great day! :)

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      Julie2 4 years ago from New York City

      All I can say is Beautiful!

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hi, Julie! That's all I can ask :) ....... Thanks for stopping by!

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and beautiful. The first warmest and most romantic and heartfelt poem I have read on this New Year's Day. May all wonderful things find their way to you this year Lizzie and bring you much joy in 2013. Passing this on.

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hi there, Gypsy Rose! All the best to you too, this year, and may all your dreams come true, my Fairytale friend! :)

      Thanks for stopping by......

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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      Very beautiful poem for this New Year's Day! Happy New Year with love all around!

      Voted up +++ and sharing God bless. In His Love, Faith Reaper

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Wonderful to see you here, dear Faith! Have a wonderful day, and may your year be filled with joy and happiness! :)

      Thanks for being a friend.....

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      Lissette 4 years ago from Central Florida

      LaThing, a poetic beauty. I am returning to me and am relearning to read, slowly. This was a perfect way to embrace my mind and I appreciate finding it.

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hi there, Moms-Secret, lovely to see you here! Appreciate your kind comment and glad you enjoyed it..... :)

      See you around!

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      epigramman 4 years ago

      Deep, pure, sincere, heartfelt - these words come from you - and it's a special place because of your poetic heart and the lovely lady behind the golden pen.

      Sending you warm wishes and good energy from lake erie time ontario canada 1:04pm and thank you for always inspiring me with your unique style and creative flair

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Thank you, dear Epi, for these beautiful words! Means a lot when it comes from you :) Always a pleasure to see you, and returning all the warmest wishes from this side of the boarder! Take care, my friend.....

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      Rev Bruce S Noll HMN 4 years ago from Asheville NC

      Each line, LaThing, drew me to the next and each deeper into the passion of the Heart! As rich and compelling as this is, the heart remains an enigma to so many. Thank you for sharing this exquisite form of literary art!

      I so enjoyed it!

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hi, Bruce..... So good to see you here! I am glad it touched your heart. :)

      Always a pleasure to see you. I hope you had a great start at the new year. Thanks for your comment, see you around.

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      Nithya Venkat 4 years ago from Dubai

      Beautifully written. Great poem.

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Thanks, Nithya for your comment and for stopping by. It's great to see you here :)

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      Rosemary Sadler 4 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

      This is beautifully written Lizzie. The words just take me deeper into the emotions. Love the flow.

      All the best for 2013

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Thanks, Rosemay.... It's a pleasure to see you here. Appreciate your beautiful comment :)

      All the best to you too, for 2013!

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      ahorseback 4 years ago

      Okay !.....................:-} Just kidding , beautiful thoughts all ! Your quite the romantic !..........Ed

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      Fehl Dungo 4 years ago from close to you...

      This is so heartfelt and beautiful. Felt like floating reading it.

      La..thing :)

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      LOL @ Eddy! Thanks for stopping by, it's always a pleasure to read your comments. You make my day, Cowboy!! LOL

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hi, Blaise! Long time no see! Thanks for the beautiful comment...... See u around.

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      Sueswan 4 years ago

      Hi LaThing

      Beautiful. The stanza that caught my eye was

      "Hold me tight;

      Keep me warm in your arms.

      Cover me with love,

      But don't let your feelings show!"

      Sad that the fallen soul wants her lover's feelings to show but it seems too late.

      Voted up and away

      Sharing

      Take care :)

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Hello LaThing....its very passionate and so much full with emotion. Thank you for sharing this one. Love beyond life and love very deep is so beautifully reflected in this poem. I really enjoyed every words you have painted here. Votes way up and sharing too.

      Take care......

      Deergha

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      Sunnie Day 4 years ago

      Very beautiful. a yearning, a wanting to be held, never to let go, when everything around them is falling a part. So happy this was shared once more.

      Loved it. The picture was precious.

      Sunnie

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hi, Sue..... great to see you here! thanks for the wonderful comment and appreciate all your support :)

      See you around .... take care!

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hi, Deeghra..... How nice of you to take your time and spend it with me :)

      Love is strange, isn't it? LOL. I like writing about it and didn't reliaze that I had a romantic nature until I started writing poems :)

      Thanks for the comment and everything. See you around....

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hi, Sunnie, great to see you here! Thanks for such a wonderful comment and for dropping by. Always a pleasure to see you :)

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      Lisa Williams 4 years ago

      This is beautiful, it flows so gracefully. Thanks for sharing, I voted up!

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hi, Lisa, great to see you here! Thanks for stopping by and sharing.... :)

      Take care.....

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      Yesenia Reyes 4 years ago from Los Angeles

      Lovely, just lovely!

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Thank you, Victoria! Appreciate your comment and visit :)

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      Romeos Quill 4 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      So beautiful, and tender.I like this one a great deal.

      Yours Sincerely,

      R.Q.

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      LaThing 3 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Thanks, RQ for the comment and the visit. My apologies for responding so late! Glad you enjoyed this :)

      See you around....

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