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On a tough deal!

Updated on August 20, 2014

A rugged life

Roughens

The course of

Rough living!


Coursing out

A coarse life

Yields

A productive living!


Producing

A fruitful life

Pays on

A booming living!


A booming life

Sets out

To rerail

An impoverished living!


A rerailed life

Cornucopias on

A aPhoenix living!

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      Tim Mitchell 3 years ago from Escondido, CA

      Introspective. The reader is guaranteed moments of thought and treasures with insight.

      tim

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      Harish Mamgain 3 years ago from India

      Interesting and very truthful. Narrow and rough ways teach us how to make our way through this great zigzag that is life. One word I could not understand whether it is phoenix or something else since a is joined with it. Is it the opposite of Phoenix ?

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      sujaya venkatesh 3 years ago

      s hari

      tnq hari n tsm

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      Deborah-Diane 3 years ago from Orange County, California

      Inspiring poem

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      A tough deal perhaps but not tough poetry.

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      sujaya venkatesh 3 years ago

      tnq gyp n deb

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      Audrey Hunt 3 years ago from Nashville Tn.

      I was born during the roughest of times and life was hard. I'm grateful today for those tough times. They made me what I am today. Excellent poem with a good message. Votes up and more.

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      sujaya venkatesh 3 years ago

      you are great vo

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      Juliane Maala 3 years ago

      "Coursing out

      A coarse life

      Yields

      A productive living!"

      Very true! It inspires people to appreciate the numerous hardships which occur in their lives instead of thinking of these as "punishments"

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      sujaya venkatesh 3 years ago

      tnx juli

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