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A Triumphant Life

Updated on September 20, 2016
we may see with our own eyes and decide if life is worthwhile...
we may see with our own eyes and decide if life is worthwhile...


Has life been a ruse, is every moment spent, a battle to lose, as death arrives,

Is there more to fantasy in most lives, this to aid in a continuation that thrives?

What is the true meaning of life, why we are here, is it purposeful, each season,

Should we accept hours of the day, months of the year, having rhyme or reason?


Every day is a special day for each of us and all of creation...
Every day is a special day for each of us and all of creation...


Should we all feel so very blessed, so honored by life, immeasurably revered,

As some situations seem to persist, each day, as a terrible quest, so feared?

Must we understand that life is a chance, to be here alone, only circumstance,

Could we be chosen by our progenitor, every mother's child known in advance?

Every spore but a structure composed of atoms in a finite composition...
Every spore but a structure composed of atoms in a finite composition...


Are all molecular structures, each atom, part and parcel of the entire universe,

Our own origins to be traced, from afar, as we search and discover in reverse?

Did we not evolve, as most mysteries are left to solve, yet, created, to rehearse,

Must there not be a grand and benevolent creator of it all, to fulfill each verse?

We all should savor every moment we are alive upon this earth...
We all should savor every moment we are alive upon this earth...


This precious breath of life, each receives at birth, a most welcoming greeting,

The smallest insects, the reptiles, all birds, fish, and mammals, a life meeting.

A right to life, to live and to breathe, the creatures one and all, In their entirety,

Given this rarest gem, each blessed variety, are structured well in their society.

Every living thing deserves its chance to survive upon this earth and experience the gift of all life...
Every living thing deserves its chance to survive upon this earth and experience the gift of all life...


Life's essence, the spark that ignites our beginnings, showered upon each,

As with our first breath to our last gasp, a beautiful endurance we beseech.

Our maker, on whom we depend, with open arms receives us, all love to send,

Confirming for all time, our beginning, not an end, a meaning to comprehend.

Beautiful coexistence... all rights reserved and under copyright 2016
Beautiful coexistence... all rights reserved and under copyright 2016

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      Michael-Milec 10 months ago

      .. a poem of much light reflecting on the mysteries of life, the gift undeserved, making me closer monitoring the will of the Creator, thus His purpose entrusted to me on earth would be fulfilled completely. ( The best choice is to trust and obey)

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      whonunuwho 10 months ago from United States

      Thank you so much my friend and I'm glad you appreciated my work. Blessings. whonu

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      Audrey Hunt 10 months ago from Nashville Tn.

      Hi David

      This verse spoke to me sealing promise and purpose to this daily miracle I experience...life.

      "Are all molecular structures, each atom, part and parcel of the entire universe,

      Our own origins to be traced, from afar, as we search and discover in reverse?

      Did we not evolve, as most mysteries are left to solve, yet, created, to rehearse,

      Must there not be a grand and benevolent creator of it all, to fulfill each verse?"

      I live each day with one purpose and one person only. To do His will. I find that when I place this goal above all others everything falls in to it's rightful place.

      When cancer claimed my beautiful son 6 years ago leaving my 4 grandchildren without their only parent I wanted to give up on God. It took me some time to find my way back to Him.

      Hub pages came to my rescue when I began writing. I found supportive and loving friends to help me through my grief. God sent me here.

      Thank you for your lovely, insightful poetry.

      Blessings to you and yours,

      Audrey

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      whonunuwho 10 months ago from United States

      Thank you so much Audrey and I'm pleases that you find my work worthy in reading. Blessings to you and yours. whonu

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      Dora Isaac Weithers 10 months ago from The Caribbean

      "Must there not be a grand and benevolent creator of it all . . " You never let us forget the creator. Beautiful and meaningful.

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      whonunuwho 10 months ago from United States

      Thank you MsDora and blessings on this new Fall day. whonu

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 10 months ago from Riga, Latvia

      Enjoyed being a part of nature through your poetic words.

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      whonunuwho 10 months ago from United States

      Thank you much my friend. whonu

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