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A costly love!

Updated on September 9, 2015

An enthusiastic entrepreneuse of heart

you are,

my dear,

in enterprise all and sundry,

my love,

deal with special attention and care

my sweety,

a regular customer I am;

I plead you

not to put up

the price of your pricey heart,

the way to your bosom

sensed I

is all

but a primrose path;

a priceless product of all purchases

and

the costliest commodity

for a craving customer

like me,

you prove!

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      stella vadakin 20 months ago from 3460NW 50 St Bell, Fl32619

      Hi, A very beautiful poem, I think is saying how costly this love can be.

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      sujaya venkatesh 20 months ago

      hi tnq Lady

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      Dora Isaac Weithers 20 months ago from The Caribbean

      Love your p alliteration in that line, and of course, the entire poem.

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 20 months ago from Victoria, Australia

      Love can be costly, but anything worthwhile usually is. Interesting poem.

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      Marlene Bertrand 20 months ago from Northern California, USA

      Very lovely. The very last line is like an exclamation point... "you prove!" Nothing more to add to that.

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      sujaya venkatesh 20 months ago

      sweet words tnq Do Blo Marl

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      FlourishAnyway 20 months ago from USA

      No price is too high for the the right love

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      peachy 20 months ago from Home Sweet Home

      beautiful poem, love sets no limit

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      sujaya venkatesh 20 months ago

      thats love anyway Flo Peach

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 20 months ago from Riga, Latvia

      Lovely!

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      sujaya venkatesh 20 months ago

      tnq Gyp

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      xInspiredx 20 months ago from Arizona

      A very beautiful poem. Quite impressive in the choice of the layout and words you choose. Great work!

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      sujaya venkatesh 20 months ago

      tnq Xin

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      Hari Prasad S 20 months ago from Bangalore

      when was,

      an ease,

      this business,

      been.

      with you my love.

      - hari

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      sujaya venkatesh 20 months ago

      tnq 74

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