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A costly love!

Updated on September 9, 2015

An enthusiastic entrepreneuse of heart

you are,

my dear,

in enterprise all and sundry,

my love,

deal with special attention and care

my sweety,

a regular customer I am;

I plead you

not to put up

the price of your pricey heart,

the way to your bosom

sensed I

is all

but a primrose path;

a priceless product of all purchases

and

the costliest commodity

for a craving customer

like me,

you prove!

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    • sujaya venkatesh profile image
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      sujaya venkatesh 2 years ago

      tnq 74

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      Hari Prasad S 2 years ago from Bangalore

      when was,

      an ease,

      this business,

      been.

      with you my love.

      - hari

    • sujaya venkatesh profile image
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      sujaya venkatesh 2 years ago

      tnq Xin

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      xInspiredx 2 years ago from Arizona

      A very beautiful poem. Quite impressive in the choice of the layout and words you choose. Great work!

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      sujaya venkatesh 2 years ago

      tnq Gyp

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 2 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Lovely!

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      sujaya venkatesh 2 years ago

      thats love anyway Flo Peach

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      peachy 2 years ago from Home Sweet Home

      beautiful poem, love sets no limit

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      FlourishAnyway 2 years ago from USA

      No price is too high for the the right love

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      sujaya venkatesh 2 years ago

      sweet words tnq Do Blo Marl

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      Marlene Bertrand 2 years ago from Northern California, USA

      Very lovely. The very last line is like an exclamation point... "you prove!" Nothing more to add to that.

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 2 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      Love can be costly, but anything worthwhile usually is. Interesting poem.

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      Dora Weithers 2 years ago from The Caribbean

      Love your p alliteration in that line, and of course, the entire poem.

    • sujaya venkatesh profile image
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      sujaya venkatesh 2 years ago

      hi tnq Lady

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      stella vadakin 2 years ago from 3460NW 50 St Bell, Fl32619

      Hi, A very beautiful poem, I think is saying how costly this love can be.