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A distinctive love!

Updated on October 3, 2015
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My rarest of rarest love,

my leap year February,

you are!

the beauty of a kurinji flower

a much-awaited mahamagam festival

a celebration of diwali

a beauty so rare

one so unique

socketing all strangeness in your wild moist eyes

making the beholders despair for love

and

the hearts of all beaux plunge into desperate darkness,

with the exception of

this common beau holding on to hope

to pluck the rarest of all fruits!

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      Dora Isaac Weithers 21 months ago from The Caribbean

      This poem reminds me of the lover's expressions in the Song of Songs. Beautiful!

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      sujaya venkatesh 21 months ago

      tnq Do Jo

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      manatita44 21 months ago from london

      Deep, I see why you have studied Shakespeare. Write until you feel your own niche. If you already feel this, then cool. There is tremendous potential for the lofty and sublime in your writings. Just like moi. Chuckle ..

      In Love and Light.

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      FlourishAnyway 21 months ago from USA

      Lofty love -- that's exactly what this poem describes

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      Elena 21 months ago from London, UK

      Wow, that's a beautiful poem for a month. :-)

      I enjoyed it.

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      sujaya venkatesh 21 months ago

      your words are inspiring Man Flo Lady

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 21 months ago from Riga, Latvia

      Simply beautiful poetry.

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      sujaya venkatesh 21 months ago

      tnq Gyp

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      Larry Rankin 21 months ago from Oklahoma

      Always enjoy your poems.

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      sujaya venkatesh 21 months ago

      tnq Lar

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      Deb Hirt 21 months ago from Stillwater, OK

      Well said, as always, fresh as the mountain air flowing on the eternal breeze.

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      sujaya venkatesh 21 months ago

      oh that's great Av

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      poetryman6969 19 months ago

      Such a lovely flower.

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      sujaya venkatesh 19 months ago

      tnq poe

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