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A feel of love!

Updated on April 21, 2015
  • Deodorizing

my flaws and weaknesses

with barring behaviour,

reoxidized I

my nature

with mending manners

to whiten

the blackened block

in a deoxidized state,

just for my love!




  • A beast of burden

am I

carrying loads of love

for my loveless lass,

but am helpless

at the burden of proof

to my dubious dame!





  • An alimony of love

alleviates not

the pang of estrangement,

rather

proscribes

the prescribed nature of love

that makes allowances

free!

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    • sujaya venkatesh profile image
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      sujaya venkatesh 3 years ago

      tnx gyp

    • Gypsy Rose Lee profile image

      Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      A wonderful poem of love.

    • sujaya venkatesh profile image
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      sujaya venkatesh 3 years ago

      tnx drm

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      DREAM ON 3 years ago

      Very powerful and exciting. You have lots of talent.

    • sujaya venkatesh profile image
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      sujaya venkatesh 3 years ago

      tnx rachel

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      Rachael O'Halloran 3 years ago from United States

      I especially like the last one - "an alimony of love alleviates not the pang of estrangement, rather proscribes the prescribed nature of love that makes allowances free!"