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A love halo!

Updated on November 30, 2015

Encompassed with a nimbus of love

rained I my affection

on my beloved

four and twenty hours

though a lil niminy-piminy shy

I was

oh my love

as for my beauty

modesty blushes her cheeks


adding on to her exquisite beauty

love for her in my heart

reigning supreme

more such accolades shall follow suit!


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      sujaya venkatesh 2 years ago

      thank ye'll for your compliments Do Man Lar Avi Brak

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      Audrey Selig 2 years ago from Oklahoma City, Oklahoma

      Hi suja - What a lovely poem about love. You are good at describing the feelings and power of love. Blessings, Audrey

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      Deb Hirt 2 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      That is certainly the way to do it. You should stop by to visit once in a while...

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      Larry Rankin 2 years ago from Oklahoma

      Beautifully written.

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      manatita44 2 years ago from london

      Extremely beautiful, Sujaya.

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      Dora Weithers 2 years ago from The Caribbean

      You're among the best at describing love.

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      sujaya venkatesh 2 years ago

      tnq RLA

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      Rachel L Alba 2 years ago from Every Day Cooking and Baking

      What a lovely poem. Thanks for sharing.

      Blessings to you.