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A love-lorn lad!

Updated on April 11, 2015
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Limning my love

though not

in a limerick style,

Go I limboing

with loads of

hopes of love!



Lily-livered am I

in littering

words of love;

Alas!

Lithoid you seem

Belittling my longing-love!



Loner I stand

left in the lurch

loving

the looie of love!

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    • sujaya venkatesh profile image
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      sujaya venkatesh 3 years ago

      tnx gyp

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Loved this! Cleverly done with all those lllllsss.

    • sujaya venkatesh profile image
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      sujaya venkatesh 3 years ago

      love your lines Blo!

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 3 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      Love your lovely lyric. The liquidity of L leads to loads of life and little waves littorally lapping.

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      sujaya venkatesh 3 years ago

      tnx al

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

      You use the letter L so well..Enjoyed!

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      sujaya venkatesh 3 years ago

      tnx Cat

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      Catherine Giordano 3 years ago from Orlando Florida

      I enjoyed your word-play.

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      sujaya venkatesh 3 years ago

      tnx sus

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      Susan Zutautas 3 years ago from Ontario, Canada

      Beautiful!