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A love-note on high!

Updated on February 16, 2015

Having pinnacled myself

on the precipice of love

appeal I to you

to reconsider your decision

of deserting me;

tears and sweat

have walked the way up

to reach the summit

of your heart;

slip I would

in the waters I shed

when thrown down

sans mercy;

What harm

have I done

for your heartless root-out;

beseech I earnestly

to reprieve the penance

and help me feel indispensable

in your love space

of life!

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    • sujaya venkatesh profile image
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      sujaya venkatesh 2 years ago

      tnx man

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      manatita44 2 years ago from london

      Beautiful!

    • sujaya venkatesh profile image
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      sujaya venkatesh 2 years ago

      tnx gyp

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 2 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      You've certainly reached the high note of love. Enjoyed.

    • sujaya venkatesh profile image
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      sujaya venkatesh 2 years ago

      am floating laugh tnq

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      Alysia McAlister 2 years ago from Arizona

      your poetry is on a par with Kahlil Gibran. you could probably talk a zebra right out of their stripes. Amazing!