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A paradise – the poem

Updated on August 1, 2012
let us walk the road less traveled...!
let us walk the road less traveled...! | Source

A paradise less travelled – the poem


One winning some loud argument nasty

Other heart crying cloud untamed rainy,

Even the angst spilled hurts winner edgy

It is always true but never uttered honestly.

Sweaty rain wets some eager earth

Heavy rain around cleans brutal crust,

Loving bouncy smiles wet soul thirst

Sublime smile spilled heals wound fast.

Do not you see..the rain wets the rain itself?

Do not you see …the anger hurts the inside itself?

Do not you see..the hate hates the heart itself?

And…………...

Do not you see….the smile creates bliss itself?

Let the rain cleans the anger

And bounce back some smile for a change…

Let the winner lost the encounter

And love the loser with love for essence.

Some paradise on earth,

Some smiles on the path.

Some rose for the hatred,

Some bless for the wounded.

Can we walk the lanes less travelled…

To create a world often talked…

But barely tried to be created….?

Hand in hand we walk…for the eternity.

……………………………………………………..

If I get angry, hug me tightly…

If I cry, hold me gently….

If I smile, follow me closely…

If you cry, I will die…

For your tears…life stops.

When you smile..

I close my eye..

For I want to imprison your joy forever and ever.

………………………………………………………..

Me and you, let us start

To walk……

and one day will come

paradise will be on earth.

…………………………………………….

Here is the seed to begin…

….a step ahead makes all the change within.

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      deergha 5 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thank you@ Olde Cashmere.....for your votes and mainly i am grateful for your gracious visit and comment here.

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      Thank you@aviannovice.....for your visit here and kind words.

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      Deb Hirt 5 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      So aptly said. This is a good way to say that we should respect each other, no matter what.

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      Olde Cashmere 5 years ago

      Beautiful poetry dghbrh. Voted up, beautiful, and awesome. Enjoyed the message in these words :)

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      deergha 5 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      thank you@tillsotitan for stopping by and your kind words:-)

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      Mary Craig 5 years ago from New York

      I voted up and awesome too! This is an awesome poem touching into the depths of those feelings we need to abandon together with the ones we need to share, " a step ahead makes all the change within" !!

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      deergha 5 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thanks@Gypsy.....for stopping by and it feels nice to know that you are getting the message in it.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and awesome. Such a wonderful message.

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      deergha 5 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thanks@BeyondMax for you stopped by and taking time to comment here.

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      BeyondMax 5 years ago from Sydney, Australia

      What a thoughtful journey! Beautifully done, touching, really heartfelt!

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      deergha 5 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thanks for your comment@Mhatter...you are very right.....all the end is one way the beginning of the next till the eternity.

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      Martin Kloess 5 years ago from San Francisco

      Nice adventure. At the end we are at the beginning

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      deergha 5 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      hey Spy....thank you so much for your uninterrupted support and inspiration. its always most welcome

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      Thank you@lifehealpraise.....for your kind words.......its so much appreciated here.

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      oh dear Michele....thank you so much for your kind feelings.....you are always welcome to read my poem...and it feels nice that you like these. thanks for voting up.

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      Michele Travis 5 years ago from U.S.A. Ohio

      Once again a wonderful poem. I wish I could write poems like this, but since I cannot, I will read yours.

      Voted up,

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      lifehealpraise 5 years ago from South Florida

      Beautiful beautiful and the image at the end is perfect! Thank you for the beauty this morning and may grace be with you.

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      some of us neglect to choose the path we should be taking. lovely message for all of us.

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      deergha 5 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thank you@Harry for stopping by and taking time to comment here. It is much appreciated.

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      harry 5 years ago

      wow such a wonderful poem Dee i love to read it ....:)

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      deergha 5 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thank you so much dear......it feels nice when one gets connected through the feelings.

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      Michelle Liew 5 years ago from Singapore

      I love the message of this poem. We should walk on the lane of happiness, one less travelled - forget all the petty hate and argument and put it aside simply because it makes us feel worse and gets us nowhere. Well done and I'm sharing this too!

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