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A place without a morning – a poem

Updated on June 19, 2015
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I am no more me

I do not feel when you stab me deep

Tripping blood dye a cerise nostalgia at times

No more I do feel like dying

Do not you worry....

I am not telling you this any more

Barely ranting spree of a senseless spectre

Random blankness is here to mourn

Feelings do squirm at all those tears shed

Unworthy and abandoned cacophony

Heart diluted to empty words

Only a barren eclipsed wall of Dead Sea

Trussed with the uncanny fervour

Without a name to the illicit affair

Blinded by a you that is so illusory

You that was, in a mind only

I own that you in the hearts of my heart

A bottomless dark dead sea now

Icy crux all stroked to be warmth

Ignited with fallacy of love

Reality is a suffice of paradox

I do not feel like crying now

No worry alas!!!

But dark contoured footsteps do return

To again slash soul into pieces

Slaying an expired heart for false pleasure

Love and passion for faked hearts

A game of nothingness but then, return you do

To check if anything is yet living in me

I do not feel like feeling again

Waiting to be an empty meaning here

For a silhouetted rainy dark night

Still a taste lingers....

The taste of death raw and heart teasing....

Withered times do return....to a place within....

And mornings are a paradox never to be real...

Yes, here and now is a place

Where Mornings do not wake up!!!!!!

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      Sarah 2 years ago

      I'd like to say, please don't steal my art for your poem. Please take it down immediately or I'll get this whole page taken down. I'm giving you a chance.

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      deergha 2 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      lisavanvorst ...many thanks for being here and glad that you have liked it.

      Deergha

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      deergha 2 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Dear Shyron,

      Many thanks for being here and leaving your valuable comment. Yeah you are right. The death of feelings I think is more pathetic than death of a person. Glad that you could relate so nicely with my emotions here.

      God bless

      Deergha

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      Audrey Howitt 2 years ago from California

      I came back for another read of this powerful piece

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      Lisa VanVorst 2 years ago from New Jersey

      Wow, powerful and sad hub. True reflection of one's feelings.

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      Shyron E Shenko 2 years ago from Texas

      Deergha, this is hauntingly beautiful and portrays no physical death but the death of the meaning of love and relationships and how empty one feels when Love has died.

      Thumb-up, UABI and shared

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      deergha 2 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Dear Chitrangada, many thanks for your beautiful comment here. Votes and shares are well appreciated also. Yes you are right some times being among people also may make us feel very empty.

      Take care and hope you are enjoying your week so far.

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      Chitrangada Sharan 2 years ago from New Delhi, India

      Very nice expressions and you have the ability to weave the words into meaningful poetry.

      Sometimes one feels lonely and empty even in a crowd. Beautifully expressed. Voted up and thanks!

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      deergha 2 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Dearest Jackie....thank you for your kind visit here.

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      Jackie Lynnley 2 years ago from The Beautiful South

      Very emotional writing...deep and a great read. ^+

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      deergha 2 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thank you very much Deb for ever encouraging words for me. Hope you are doing great.

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      Deb Hirt 2 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      An excellent play on words. Very good illusory efforts.

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      deergha 2 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      AudreyHowitt ..thank you very much, yeah you are right here....it is to depict that emptiness some times may be many people experiences within. Your comment is much appreciated here. God bless you always

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      Audrey Howitt 2 years ago from California

      Emotionally evocative write--there is a kind of emptiness here

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      deergha 2 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thank you @ keyenhancer.... for coming back again to read it. I can understand that its hard to write yourself about darker side in your own book. But I prefer to let flow whatever is natural of me. The emptiness was the spark of the moment. Some times it is better to let flow the darker emptiness within if any, so that light can sip in to make us feel lighter. Thank you really for making your time to be here once again.

      Take care and God bless you always.

      Deergha

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      deergha 2 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thank you @ Dips.....and its good to know the way you relating...but we shall overcome it and its needed to let it flow so that hope springs up some day ....thank you for being here.

      take care stay blessed always.

      deergha

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      Dipti Singha 2 years ago

      Don't i relate to this ?? Yes the emptiness and the darkest mornings are a reality sometimes...have the courage to be done with it. We are together Dee and that unseen string/bond that binds us together is something that we would not give up on...Let the feelings flow and let the heart fill light..if so it does somehow...love u always !

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      J. L. Tracey 2 years ago from United States

      Ah, I'm glad I had the right feeling, and that was speed reading! I reread at a slower pace to absorb it better. I like the dark elements. I'm usually not a fan of that and it was hard to write in my own book. However, I enjoyed this, thank you!

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      deergha 2 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Manatita...many thanks for being here. Glad that you liked it.

      Hope you are doing great.

      Take care and God bless you always

      Deergha

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      deergha 2 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thank you @ Jodah..for your valuable time and comment here.....emptiness and darkness ...are only intended to depict here. Thanks for relating with my thoughts in this one. Hope you are doing great.

      God bless you and take care

      Deergha

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      manatita44 2 years ago from london

      Totally awesome and brilliant poem, Deergha

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      John Hansen 2 years ago from Queensland Australia

      What an amazing poem Deergha, portrays emptiness and darkness as stated but your use of words is so wonderfully descriptive. Well done.

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      deergha 2 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thank you dear friend, Frank ...for your time here and comment. Yes the empty emotions some times do tend to surface and it is penned down in such a momentary flash. Anyway...thank you for loving it.

      Hope you are doing well. Take care and God bless you always

      Deergha

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      deergha 2 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Dearest Faith...always there to shower me with support my friend, thanks for being with me. Yes it is indeed dark to be vivid in emptiness around. Do not worry... just a momentary mindset to express words in a different way here. Many thanks once again for your precious time and comment here. Hope you are doing good.

      Warm hugs your way.

      Deergha

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      deergha 2 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      keyenhancer....thank you for reading this one here. Yes it is intended exactly to depict the emptiness within. Some times it so happen is that one feels all empty even if you are amidst a lot of people. Thus the mindset was for some time. Thank you for relating with my emotions of the moment without knowing from your side.

      God bless you always and I hope you enjoying your days.

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      Frank Atanacio 2 years ago from Shelton

      the poetry is dark.. kind of cold but effective.. the photos help the lonely words feel even more lonely.. love it :)

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      Faith Reaper 2 years ago from southern USA

      This one is so dramatic and dark ...yes, emptiness.

      Your gift of expressing words as you do, certainly paints the picture in our minds.

      Peace always

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      J. L. Tracey 2 years ago from United States

      I'm not sure what the intended effect was, but this poem made me feel empty.