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Kids friendship poem

Updated on July 7, 2017
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Radhika loves writing poems. She can scribble some spontaneously, whereas some of them are weaved with much care and thought.

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The two kids rambled along the glen

through the gorges, jungles and hills

they got raised by the mother nature

they never parted with each other;


They sang along-with the sweet cuckoos

danced to the steps of blue peacocks

woke-up hearing the cock’s whistles

and slept by the lullabies of nightingale;


Trees fed them with their fruits

rivers gave them water to drink

deer and rabbits made them cheer

flower-beds welcomed them to sleep;


Together they played with each other

together they shared happy moments

they were together in hard times too

they were the true friends on this earth;


One day they reached a cliffy point

one of them had a slip and hanged

the other one gasped after seeing this

but had a wise head she indeed;


Plunging a rope to her sweet friend

dragging the other end with much vigor

seeing her friend stand beside her

friendship won and destiny got lost;

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© 2012 Radhika Sreekanth

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      Radhika Sreekanth 2 years ago from Mumbai,India

      Hi Harishprasad,

      So kind of you to give such wonderful comments in my poems. True friends are those who enliven us. Thank you so much for voting up.

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      Harish Mamgain 2 years ago from India

      Anything could have happened at the climax of this poem. A wonderful poem about true friendship ! What a coincidence that today I read a true story about a little brave girl who hit a leopard with a mango and snatched her sister out of his ferocious jaws ! She is one of the kids who will be honored on Republic Day Parade in New Delhi.

      My friend, I love your poems as these so elegantly spread the importance and glory of positive human traits. Thank you. Voted up.

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      Radhika Sreekanth 4 years ago from Mumbai,India

      Thanks ishwaryaa22 for making such a nice comment. I'm glad that you liked it. Thank you very much for sharing and for voting this up.

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      Ishwaryaa Dhandapani 4 years ago from Chennai, India

      A wonderful poem about friendship! You have a unique gift with words! Way to go!

      Thanks for SHARING. Beautiful & Awesome. Voted up

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      Radhika Sreekanth 5 years ago from Mumbai,India

      Thanks Olde Cashmere for appreciating my work. Getting a true friend is a boon. Thanks for the vote and rate.

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      Olde Cashmere 5 years ago from Michigan, United States

      Powerful poem about friendship rahikasree even in the face of destiny. I really enjoy your work, voted up, beautiful, and awesome :)

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      Radhika Sreekanth 5 years ago from Mumbai,India

      Thanks tillsontitan for the positive comments. Friends should be united together even during hardship. Thanks for the vote.

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      Mary Craig 5 years ago from New York

      How nicely the poem wove the two friends together...then the terrible possibility at the end, but all ended well. A different and interesting poem. Voted up.

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      Radhika Sreekanth 5 years ago from Mumbai,India

      Thanks Peggy for reading this and I'm glad that it touched your heart. I'm bowled over by your comment that I'm the kind of friend that anyone would be fortunate to have. Thanks for the votes and the share.

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      Peggy Woods 5 years ago from Houston, Texas

      What a sweet poem and meaning of friendship. Whether friends or family...there will be good times and bad. Nice to know there is someone there to throw out a lifeline when needed. Up votes and SHARED. I am learning more about how you think with each hub I read of yours. I'll bet that you are the kind of friend that anyone would be fortunate to have.

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      Radhika Sreekanth 5 years ago from Mumbai,India

      Thanks singhrakeshs for stopping by and leaving a comment. Thanks for the votes too!

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      Radhika Sreekanth 5 years ago from Mumbai,India

      Thanks Ardie for you heartfelt comment. This is a poem of friendship, so frienship should win. Thanks for the kind comment.

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      singhrakeshs 5 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      hi radhikasree!!!!! you have writing wonderful about friendship....Thanks for sharing...

      Voted up!!!

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      Radhika Sreekanth 5 years ago from Mumbai,India

      Thanks AudreyHowitt for visiting my hub and making a sweet comment. Have a nice day!

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      Radhika Sreekanth 5 years ago from Mumbai,India

      Thanks ruchira for your wonderful comments. Yes, indeed, true friends should never part with each other. Thanks for the votes and sharing it.

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      Radhika Sreekanth 5 years ago from Mumbai,India

      Thanks lifesparadox for such a great comment! True friends really make our lives enjoyable.

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      Sondra 5 years ago from Neverland

      Oh my goodness - I couldn't help but gasp at the end of the poem when one hanged from the cliff - I was so afraid you would let her fall. Im glad you chose a sweet, happy ending for this poem :)

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      Audrey Howitt 5 years ago from California

      Very sweet poem!

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      Ruchira 5 years ago from United States

      wow these girls are courageous and true friends.

      beautiful write up Radhika.

      voted up indeed and sharing it across

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      lifesparadox 5 years ago from USA

      I love poetry about friendship and this is beautiful!! It's true, if we ever find a real true friend we have got to hang on with dear life and make sure they know how much we appreciate them. Great work!

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      Radhika Sreekanth 5 years ago from Mumbai,India

      @VincentMoore

      Thanks for the lovely comment. True friendship needs to be treasured indeed.

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      Vincent Moore 5 years ago

      True friendship never fails or leaves. This beautiful piece is a tribute to friendship, binding the love for one another together so destiny is broken and both survive to go on. Well done, voted UP.

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      Radhika Sreekanth 5 years ago from Mumbai,India

      @rajan

      Yes, true friends are a treasure. Thanks for the lovely comment.

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      Radhika Sreekanth 5 years ago from Mumbai,India

      @kathleen kerswig

      I'm excited to know that you've got such wonderful, true friends. You are really blessed for having them and I feel it too good to remind you of this. Thanks for the comment and blessings. Have a nice day.

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      Radhika Sreekanth 5 years ago from Mumbai,India

      @brett.

      Thanks for stopping by and making a nice compliment. I'm glad that you shared it to brighten up others' day.

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      Rajan Singh Jolly 5 years ago from From Mumbai, presently in Jalandhar,INDIA.

      True friends are so rare, indeed they are to be treasured.

      Struck a chord deep within. Thanks for this lovely poem.

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      Kathleen Kerswig 5 years ago

      I don't know where I would be without those friends who threw me a rope when I needed it. I am truly blessed to have some wonderful people in my life and this beautiful poem reminded me of this. Thank you for sharing it here. Blessings.

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      Brett Caulton 5 years ago from Thailand

      Interesting imagery and a beautiful poetic tribute to friends, will share it to brighten a few others day.

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      Radhika Sreekanth 5 years ago from Mumbai,India

      Thanks Lesley for giving me a nice compliment. Glad that you enjoyed this poem very much.

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      Movie Master 5 years ago from United Kingdom

      Wonderful writing, I enjoyed this poem very much thank you.

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      Radhika Sreekanth 5 years ago from Mumbai,India

      Thanks Kamalesh for stopping by and encouraging me.

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      Kamalesh050 5 years ago from Sahaganj, Dist. Hooghly, West Bengal, India

      Truly enjoyed the poem. It's Awesome! Keep up your good work,my friend.

      Best Wishes, Kamalesh

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      Radhika Sreekanth 5 years ago from Mumbai,India

      Hi Shaun.....it's awesome to see you here. Glad that my poem could touch your soul. Thanks for voting it up.

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      Radhika Sreekanth 5 years ago from Mumbai,India

      Thanks you Rahul for giving a nice compliment. I crafted these true friends in my imagination!!

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      Shaun75 5 years ago from Edison

      Awesome!! Touched the soul.... voted up... keep writing Radhikasree.

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      Jessee R 5 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      A very sweet poem...

      friendship is an amazing gift from god. In this modern day world it is very difficult to find true friends!

      Nice share.. voted up!