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A proven love!

Updated on September 18, 2014

Rule out your suspicion

at this instant;

Happy am not

in your absence;

Meals are platter full,

Dishevell'd hair

requiring a comb,

sunk'n eyes

and hollow cheeks

with unpowder'd face,

disinterest in decking,

gott'n away with gadgets,

wasting time aplenty,

staring at the wall

with brimful tears,

shunning any kind of chat,

The world is no matter to me

As long as

you remain beside me!


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      Bill Holland 3 years ago from Olympia, WA

      Ah yes, I know the feeling well. :) It sure is nice having that special someone in our lives.

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      sujaya venkatesh 3 years ago

      tnx bil

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      Shyron E Shenko 3 years ago from Texas

      Sujaya, awesome poem. You painted a picture of me without my special someone. I almost lost him once "Countdown to a Miracle". You surprised me with this poem.

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      Harish Mamgain 3 years ago from India

      This is a real portrayal of feelings of absence of a beloved. In India, we have a treasure of folk songs of separation ( viraha lokgeet ). I love this poem. Voted up.

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      John Hansen 3 years ago from Queensland Australia

      Good poem Sujaya, as others have said.

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      sujaya venkatesh 3 years ago

      tnq shy hari n jo

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      mylindaelliott 3 years ago from Louisiana

      I remember feeling like that. :)

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 3 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      A beautiful poem.

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      sujaya venkatesh 3 years ago

      tnx myl n blo

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      Devika Primić 3 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      A lovely poem with true expressions

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      sujaya venkatesh 3 years ago

      tnx dde

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and beautiful. Very expressive.

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      Dora Isaac Weithers 3 years ago from The Caribbean

      Your first and last lines remind me of my poem on friendship.

      "To love without having to prove it;To be loved without reason to doubt it."

      Oh the power of love from friends we love. Enjoyable!

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      sujaya venkatesh 3 years ago

      tnx gyp n do

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