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A terrific love!

Updated on November 20, 2015

In matters of love

it is quite natural to be romantic,

makes sense;

Oh pho, my dear!

what on earth makes it sudorific

that as you can see

I sweat so profusely?

Haven’t laboured in the nearest hour,

work I hard

only towards your heart,

though not a physical strain

sure it is

an emotional struggle,

my love!

Nevertheless,

the arrow aimed at your bosom

eventually

drugs me to a soporific drowsiness;

perhaps

first stepping into the satin street of love

little did I anticipate

its strenuous course

forgive me

for I was more of a sophomoric kind

then!

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    • sujaya venkatesh profile image
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      sujaya venkatesh 21 months ago

      tnq Gyp

    • Gypsy Rose Lee profile image

      Gypsy Rose Lee 21 months ago from Riga, Latvia

      Just beautiful!

    • sujaya venkatesh profile image
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      sujaya venkatesh 21 months ago

      tnq Thel

    • Thelma Alberts profile image

      Thelma Alberts 21 months ago from Germany

      Beautiful poem!

    • sujaya venkatesh profile image
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      sujaya venkatesh 21 months ago

      tnq Dan Do Nel

    • Nell Rose profile image

      Nell Rose 21 months ago from England

      Lovely poem sujaya! nell

    • Dana Tate profile image

      Dana Tate 21 months ago from LOS ANGELES

      Beautiful and poetic.

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      Dora Isaac Weithers 21 months ago from The Caribbean

      Yea, it's a lifetime of learning; hoping that it turns out terrific in a good way.

    • sujaya venkatesh profile image
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      sujaya venkatesh 21 months ago

      tnq Erc

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      Eric Dierker 21 months ago from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A.

      Great use of words. A very telling tale, thanks