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A thrilling moment!

Updated on September 6, 2014


You had been to my house

more often than most!

Thought I

love for my family

drove you nigh!

Took you special interest

in engaging me in love-talk!

Dismissed I your prates,

for it triggered not

a bit of emotion in me,



you had expected me

to melt down

like an ice lump exposed to

the scorching Sun!

Your not so amorous words

had always sparkled

my amusing eyes!



when I bumped into you


almost after a decade,

I could feel

that you haven’t still

got off the feelings for me!

How you have retained them

like sheep!

How your pupils dilute

at the very sight of me!

Electrified I was

at your more crazy behaviour,

looking for each moment

to bombard my eyes


seeking desperately

for snatches of chit-chats!


the impact is tremendous

in me

much to my shock!

I felt

like a dog yawning

along with his master!

Sorry -

had I hurt you,

not comprehending

your immense love for me!


lucky to have missed you then


to see you even so hot for me

till now!

It is true -

times do change


not our admiration

for each other!

Love you utmost


feel great

to taste your intense love!

Just a love-secret between us!


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    • sujaya venkatesh profile image

      sujaya venkatesh 3 years ago

      tnx al gyp do

    • MsDora profile image

      Dora Weithers 3 years ago from The Caribbean

      I know the kind of love, Sujaya. Secret, lasting and enjoyable. Good love poem!

    • Gypsy Rose Lee profile image

      Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Lovely pictures and great poetry.

    • always exploring profile image

      Ruby Jean Richert 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Hummm, I think I know that feeling. Good one Suj.