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A topic on love!

Updated on January 22, 2016

Pitching on the theme of love

by design

I pitched in my thoughts and emotions

intentionally

to render smooth

the verses of romance

that may kindle nigh the feelings of the kind

in those who hap (on purpose) to tumble down

the lines set in words of awe and woe alike;

the bearer at heart owes the same

eventually

to one or more that set off this affection at the core,

moreso

does the owner of this ineffable sensation

magnify its wow glamour quotient

to draw in very many hearts that seem afloat!

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    • sujaya venkatesh profile image
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      sujaya venkatesh 21 months ago

      tnq Til

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      Mary Craig 21 months ago from New York

      Very nicely done and full ofo love.

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      sujaya venkatesh 22 months ago

      tnq Gyp Peg and Jon well-said

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      Theresa Jonathan 22 months ago from Maseru, Lesotho

      Love is in every formula for success: Love contributes to optimal health. Love enable all living things to find harmony and peace. Love is a key ingredient for financial success. Without love you are and have nothing!

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      Peggy Woods 22 months ago from Houston, Texas

      Love is something everyone desires and also deserves. Good topic for a poem.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 22 months ago from Riga, Latvia

      Beautifully said.

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      sujaya venkatesh 22 months ago

      tnq Av

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      Deb Hirt 22 months ago from Stillwater, OK

      Perfectly said.

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      sujaya venkatesh 22 months ago

      Oh thank you'll Lar Swa Do Nell Jo Jon

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      Larry Rankin 22 months ago from Oklahoma

      Eloquently said.

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      Shaloo Walia 22 months ago

      A beautiful expression of love!

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      Dora Weithers 22 months ago from The Caribbean

      You excel at this topic "by design," "intentionally!" Good work.

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      Nell Rose 22 months ago from England

      Beautifully done! what a lovely poem!

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      John Hansen 22 months ago from Queensland Australia

      This is a delightful poem expressing love Sujaya. Love(ly)

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      Theresa Jonathan 22 months ago from Maseru, Lesotho

      A beautiful hub; one that needs one to connect with the author to perceive the intense emotion of love! I love it!