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A whacky love!

Updated on November 4, 2015

In love?

Ha ha!

From maniac depression

sure to suffer,

a smile excites you

as much as

a look depresses,

lead to mood swings

the emotional extremes

affecting the daily chores;

A crazy feel!

Rid of it.

Yeah yeah,

I can hear,

‘It’s impossible!’


Love seems an impasse

for many a heart


Dwell well


with immense joy

be content

Warn you!

Let there not be

a drop of sufferance

oozing out of your eyes

to wet your cheeks

that manifests the pain

in the love stricken heart

of yours!


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    • sujaya venkatesh profile image

      sujaya venkatesh 23 months ago

      yes Au

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      C E Clark 23 months ago from North Texas

      Isn't it interesting how different people see things differently?

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      sujaya venkatesh 2 years ago

      oh really Flo tnx for overthinking on this GOD'S BLESSINGS!

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      FlourishAnyway 2 years ago from USA

      This struck me as a bit funny. I think it was just me, sujaya, and the things going on around me right now. I'm not sure I'd seek out a whacky kind of guy but perhaps a "steady Eddy." There's something to be said for predictable and steady.

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      sujaya venkatesh 2 years ago

      true Til

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      Mary Craig 2 years ago from New York

      You've looked at love from a more humorous side, one we shouldn't forget. We must never forget the good as well as the bad. Love is such a gift.

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      sujaya venkatesh 2 years ago

      tnq Gyp Roz

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      Rozina Iftikhar 2 years ago from Islamabad

      may be that's the real beauty of love...its whackiness!

      a brilliant piece..enjoyed the read...

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 2 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Enjoyed the wistfulness in the poem.

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      sujaya venkatesh 2 years ago

      haha grt RJS

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      Ralph Schwartz 2 years ago from Idaho Falls, Idaho

      Great piece, made me smile and reminds me of those "first love" moments back when I was young, when every move had meaning both bad and good. Thanks for sharing !

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      sujaya venkatesh 2 years ago

      tnqll for your motivating words VM Frnk Miz Lar RLA

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      Venkatachari M 2 years ago from Hyderabad, India

      Nice lines describing whacky love and moods extreme.

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      Frank Atanacio 2 years ago from Shelton

      Sujaya, this was actually pretty good .. awesome my friend :)

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      MizBejabbers 2 years ago

      Sounds like love gone wrong. I hope not. Lovely imagery.

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      Larry Rankin 2 years ago from Oklahoma

      Whacky love is among the most interesting.

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      Rachel L Alba 2 years ago from Every Day Cooking and Baking

      Hi Sujaya, Your poem is thoughtful. Love can do many things to ones heart and soul. Thanks for sharing.

      Have a blessed Thanksgiving.