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A Father Son Tale From The Land Of Aww (limerick)

Updated on November 30, 2015

A father shared thoughts with his son

He knew from his gloom what’s begun

My son head may twirl

And stomach may hurl

And this was just girl number one


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      Deb Hirt 5 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      And let the tumult begin...

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Awwww is right. Those first heart breaks can seem like the end of the world even for girls.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Poor Kid, his heart will mend and do it all over again..Hee

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      Shining Irish Eyes 5 years ago from Upstate, New York

      Its all downhill from here.

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      Rich 5 years ago from Kentucky

      Never had a son, only two daughters. My talks were simple, get pregnant and die. Worked! Great job!

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      Linda Crist 5 years ago from Central Virginia

      Nothing but the truth!

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 5 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      Oh MHatter.. poor son.. He has a life long of heartaches ahead of him., If he only knew.. I love your limerick.. hugs from Tennessee


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      Bill Holland 5 years ago from Olympia, WA

      Perfect picture, perfect music, funnier than hell limerick!

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      Faith Reaper 5 years ago from southern USA


      Aww, it did remind me of when my son fell in love for the very first time and that was right before he had gotten his driver's license, and you know how girls are, wanting someone a little older who has a car. Well, that is exactly what happened, as she went to work somewhere as a teenager and there was another guy who had a car, and that was that for my son. But he has met the One now. God bless. Voted Way Up In His Love, Faith Reaper