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A Lover’s Stroll (limerick)

Updated on August 13, 2012

He never saw sky quite so blue

The air filled with smell that was new

A soft squishy sound

Was coming from ground

His feet were confounded in poo


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      picklesandrufus 5 years ago from Virginia Beach, Va

      too funny! Makes me think of that song that starts with"when you're sliding into first and you feel a juicy burst... diarrhea,diarrhea.....

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      lol Oh yes the walk across the field only to discover the cow patties. Fantastic.

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      Nell Rose 5 years ago from England

      Haha! didn't see that bit coming! really funny!

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      Glimmer Twin Fan 5 years ago

      Another great laugh with a little bit of head shaking.

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      Martie Coetser 5 years ago from South Africa

      Oh my! I can smell it! I hope it was bullsh@t and not human....


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      Ruby Jean Fuller 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

      I'm still laughing..You are so good at this type of poetry..

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 5 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      Yes, the universe is awesome, but there is nothing like standing in a pile of poo to bring one down to earth.

      Love your wicked side.

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      Rich 5 years ago from Kentucky

      Mh -

      Absolutely hilarious!

      Why do I feel like I'm back in my Grandfather's cow pasture? By the way, did you know the best fishing worms are found underneath a semi dry cow pile? It's amazing what fish will eat.

      Great Job, my friend! Loved it!

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      Ann1Az2 5 years ago from Orange, Texas

      Good one! Sounds like some of the trailrides I went on when it was raining!

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      Joshua Zerbini 5 years ago from Pennsylvania


      HAHA, I loved this one buddy! What a gross feeling! :)

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      travmaj 5 years ago from australia

      This really brightened up my day - thank you.

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      Bill Holland 5 years ago from Olympia, WA

      You have done it once more! You are still the King of Limericks!

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      flashmakeit 5 years ago from usa

      It came from the ground and not from him?

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      Dianna Mendez 5 years ago

      Ha,ha, ha. Although, with such a elated view -- I guess even a little poo wouldn't interfere with the happiness.

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      Deb Hirt 5 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      And the moral of the story is to watch where you tread. I do that every day when I head to the park for photos, keep a sharp eye out.